The most in character Draco portrayed in fanfiction in quite some time. 5/5

 

the ending is enough to give this story 4/5

 

Excellently done, I have no idea why, but I was expecting Dumbledore to make an appearance. Not sure why, I was just waiting for him. Excellent writing anyway, 4/5, and I've added a point just for the ending, so overall 5/5

 

I read it yesterday, but couldn't make comment than.

The story actually aroused me, thougth the ending was turn off. (Good thing my boyfriend was here )

Very shocking and original.

4/5

 

Ah hahaha. I aim to please, Marie.

 

I hate reading other's posts before I read the story, it ruined the whole thing for me

I thought the smut was relatively amusing -I'm not one to wank on fiction, unlike Darius- so I'll give this story a 4/5. Would have been five if the shock factor hadn't been taken away.

 

o blech.. **shudders** Anyways, pretty funny.

4/5

 

Brilliantly Done ! Simply Ingenious! take 5/5 from me and keep writing and posting this Kind of Fanfictions.

 

wtf is with all the necro posting going on... I keep thinking theres actually a new smut story out...

 

Hey, it's haroon_angel! I remember you (vaguely), didn't you WRITE IN ALL CAPS?