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Complete And Other Things That Don't Get Old by Protagonistically - T - Batman

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Banner, Feb 6, 2018.

  1. Banner

    Banner Dark Lady

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    Title: And Other Things That Don't Get Old
    Author: Protagonistically
    Rating: Teen and up
    Genre: Tragedy
    Status: Complete
    Library Category: Horror
    Fandom: Batman
    Pairings: None
    Summary: Because Damian deserves the chance to grow up. And Bruce deserves to see it. There's always collateral damage, though.
    Tim Drake believes Bruce is trying to make amends and start their partnership anew.

    Spoilers for Batman, Batman and Robin, and Red Robin

    Link: https://archiveofourown.org/works/895186/chapters/1728650
     
    Last edited: Feb 7, 2018
  2. Republic

    Republic The Snow Queen –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    |Can you tell us a little about it, such as what to expect and what you liked/disliked in it?
     
  3. Banner

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    I *really* don't want to give away more than I already have.
    Tragedy/horror

    Tearjerker?
     
  4. CrackedMind

    CrackedMind Chief Warlock

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    Im so confused by this story. I think saying that you need an up-to-date knowledge of Batman should be a requisite, because I have no idea why Bruce is doing any of the things he is in this story.
     
  5. Republic

    Republic The Snow Queen –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    Well, you haven't given anything yet, so you need to start somewhere. You're not giving us much reason to read it beyond 'trust me it's good'. What separates this from anything else? What makes it good?
     
  6. Lamora

    Lamora Definitely Not Batman ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    It's written well technically, but the character feels nothing like Batman or Bruce Wayne. There are ways to write both of those characters well emotionally, but it's not the one I'm seeing here.

    3/5, because someone might like it, just not me.
     
  7. Zombie

    Zombie Black Philip Moderator DLP Supporter

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    I've read a lot of threads talking about how this is a super emotional piece, I didn't really get that from it. Then again the reviews were posted on Tumblr blogs.

    I guess if you're wanting some angst and that's your thing, (looking at you @T3t ) then you might like this. But other wise, I'm going to give this a 2/5.

    Decent technical writing, nothing that I saw that was glaring, but ultimately not what I wanted to read. Character pieces of Bruce Wayne are hard to pull off because of his personal nature, dark, broody, mysterious -- It just didn't serve here.
     
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