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"A Song of Ice and Fire" stories

Discussion in 'Story Search' started by purple, Jul 9, 2012.

  1. Methos

    Methos High Inquisitor DLP Supporter

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    Is it the one where all the ducks sort themselves in a row for Jon later push?
    Where Robert unknowingly does everything to empower Jon?
    While secretly everyone want the return of the Tagaryan and Marry Jon to his aunt?
    It is like no one in Westeros has a clue why Incests is a poor way to go.
    I never the all Dany/Jon shit or why Dany should be a queen, same for Jon.
    Maybe it is because I never bothered with the show.
     
  2. Download

    Download Auror ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    I'll take a look when I have some time.
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    Jon/Daenerys isn't my liking very much though. I personally find the fandom's liking to it to be disgusting.
     
  3. Seratin

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    What? What's wrong with a little aunt/nephew luv?
     
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    I completely agree @Download its up there with people pairing jon/sansa for me, like come on. Its rather annoying it will likely become book canon, I can still hold out for fAegon killing her in a second dance for a couple for years though. The morality of the relationship I don't really have a problem with in the context of Westerosi customs, marrying an aunt or cousin is not really a big deal even for people who aren't Valyrian. Its more that I generally dislike her character. This story gets me past that.

    I think I heard about a crack fic that goes like that, Robert marrying the two of them is similar but I don't see it being a walk in the park by any means if the story ends up going in that direction. @Methos
     
  5. Kai Shek

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    Incest only really creeps me out when someone grows up seeing that person as their family member. I can't read stories where Jon Snow grows up knowing that Daenerys is his aunt but still forms a romantic relationship with her.

    That's why I can't stand Jon/Sansa but I'm fine with Daenarys.
     
  6. Methos

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    I read the fic @Download mentioned up to chapter 17.

    Not sure what to think, it is a guilty pleasure at best.
    Some characters characters is diminished

    1) Ned is dumber than canon, and the author follow the crap of Honorable Ned to the bitter end and clueless as well.
    2) Catelyn is more cruel to Jon
    3) Benjen appears to be useless.
    4) Robert is more cruel and dumb


    My biggest problem with the fic, is Ned
    His decisions and reasons for them.
    Ned wasn't that stupid in canon.

    At least Stannis gets to shine.

    Further the author lacks some understanding of how lords and kings conduct themselves Ned was too much spinless in the early chapters when Robert shamed him.

    Oberyn should have being gutted.
     
  7. Donimo

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    By that logic Jon/Sansa shouldn't be a problem since they didn't really grow up as siblings. Jon/Arya though...
     
  8. Barzûl

    Barzûl Seventh Year DLP Supporter

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    They have been raised from birth as half-brother and sister. While Sansa was perhaps not as close to Jon as her other siblings, there is little doubt that they regard each other as brother and sister (even if Jon is a bastard).
    I'd make the argument that Theon/Sansa would be acceptable, as he was a hostage after the Greyjoy Rebellion. But Jon/Sansa? No way.
     
  9. Stealthy

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    Yes they did. Just because he was closer to Arya doesn’t mean he doesn’t think of Sansa as his (half)-sister. Sansa is family and he grew up thinking and believing as such.
     
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    That's absolutely idiotic.
     
  11. Donimo

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    That was my point.
     
  12. Kai Shek

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    My post made sense. Yours did not. I'm not sure how you conclude that you made a "point" with it.

    Jon and Sansa were raised as half-siblings. From the moment they understood what it meant, Jon was under the assumption that Sansa was his half sister. It did not matter if they liked each other. It did not matter if Sansa considered Jon a true brother. What mattered is that they understood their relation to one another and grew up understanding it.

    Why am I fine with it one way and not the other? Because I can't empathize with a character that suddenly gets romantic feelings for a family member. It hasn't happened to me, and just the idea of it happening to me, makes me shiver, and it simply creeps me out.

    I don't think romantic feelings can override a familial relationship, and I don't think a familial relationship can override romantic feelings. Once one or the other is established, it's hard to change it. In my opinion.
     
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  13. Spanks

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    Dragon’s in Winter by Rhiawriter
    https://archiveofourown.org/works/15908784/chapters/37082553

    In this story at some point in book one Aemon sent Daenarys a letter. When Dany flees Meereen on the back of Drogon she decides to fly to the Wall to meet her last living relative. She spends time at the Wall, it makes things difficult for Jon etc. It’s a Jon/Dany of course. So far no one knows Jon’s true heritage, but certain characters begin to question eventually. It’s pretty good, well written and the attempts at politics aren’t too bad.
     
  14. Kail420

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    Just read the latest chapter, this is turning out to be quite good.
     
  15. Barzûl

    Barzûl Seventh Year DLP Supporter

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    I like this one quite a lot. Read it all in one go (about 70k right now) and I enjoyed it. There hasn't really happened anything very memorable yet, but it's a nice fic with Jaime at the wall.

    I read a few chapters, but the SI is just so unlikable. He has no voice, he's just a "witty", obnoxious boy.
    Even when they wanted to take revenge for his father and he was like "no thanks, that's not becoming of a knight", it sounded so flat like he was talking about the weather.
    Does this change? Read to chapter 5.

    Nice fic, on my favourites list for now. Daenerys seems like a strong woman with a glimmer of that Targaeryen madness in her.
    Jon is very melancolic but it doesn't hinder the story at all. At its current pace it also seems like the story will actually be finished.
    There are some ripple effects due to their relationship, but they will probably be more notable once
    the invasion is taking place for good.
     
  16. bonnerr2

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    Just got totally caught up on this, and this is a damn good fic. Jaime is captured almost perfectly here by the author, and I didn’t notice the gradual changes to his character until we seen another POV from a southern visitor. Check it out if you haven’t yet.
     
  17. Kail420

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    Johnnyseattle Chief Warlock DLP Supporter

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    For fucks' sake.

    Could we get Doctor Strange up in here and see if there's a future where we can have a story where Jaime doesn't lose his hand in some fucking contrived way? You don't even NEED IT in this fic, he's not at all the cunt he needs to be for this to be necessary.

    Pity, because I love the story otherwise.
     
  19. Blinker

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    My hope is April fool's

    (edit bet to hope)
     
  20. Barzûl

    Barzûl Seventh Year DLP Supporter

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    I sure hope so, but I doubt it tbh.
    If it is not edited out,
    it seems unnecessary to the story and will leave Jamie quite hampered and likely to die realistically
     
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