Title: Mind Magic
Author: Boggart Returns
Rating: M
Category: Action/Adventure
Summary: Pre HBP. Slightly dark. I'm the same Boggart from Mugglenet Fanfiction The Battle of DoM changed Harry more than he realized. His powers are increasing, but how long can he last, faced with the temptation to abuse it? This is a story about power, insanity
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2747985/1/

You guys might not like the first few chapters but at least check out the second half of chapter 9. It's got a lot of potential if it can move a bit away from the shippyness.

 

<_< Take out the Harry/Ginny its bound to have, and it be a ok story

*You ARE aware that nearly everyone cept a few hate Ginny.....right?*

 

if you are worried about h/g you really want to check out the second half of chapter 9 (it's the bit where she dies)

 

-_- She doesnt die though Its a H/G Why would he kill her?

 

I tried reading this yesterday and these are my results:

Chapter 1 - Boooring. Angst, angst, Sirius please come back etc... Standard Harry pining after Sirius shit.

Chapter 2 - Cool asian chick approaches; Harry is acting like an asshole; She starts crying on mention of Lily; Harry huggs her; She promises to teach him WANDLESS MAGIC, which she uses all the time...

This is where I stopped. Seemed like a clished piece of crap to me...

 

Considering his summary says "The Battle of DoM" I'll skip this one.

 

And thus, why i've skipped reading this one. It utterly ruins a story when they use half assed abbreviations.

 

well the chapter 10 ending says its h/g....

 

Ch 10 Wrote:

"She's alive, only unconscious."

Author places entirely to much emphasis on "love", even when harry is casting the killing curse it is lost love that fuels the fire of his hatred.

 

damn

 

Story sucks. Its heavy-handed Harry/Ginny.

 

I have to agree. I just skimmed it, but it's got buttloads of sappy H/G and overpowered OCs ('Silvia,' 'Vivien,' and vampires who train Harry in martial arts).

It's over 100k words, but looks to be abandoned. 2/5