Title: The Denarian Lord
Author: Shezza88
Rating: M
Pairing: Harry/Amanda
DLP-Category: The Alternates
Chapters: 36
Words: 245,544
Updated: December 28, 2009
Published: June 30, 2008
Status: Complete
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4359957/1/The-Denarian-Lord
Link: http://patronuscharm.net/s/209/1/

Summary: Lord Voldemort readies for war while Albus Dumbledore seeks peace- through any means necessary. At the same time, Harry Potter moves to eradicate the Order of Blackened Denarius. In the middle of this is the Winter Lady, whose motives remain unknown...



The prologue is up and I found it very entertaining, Harry is still Harry and likes to burn things and people. I liked the cotton candy scene. All in all a wonderful start for a new story that we all have I expectations for.

Great work Shezza


All Books of the Series:


The Denarian Renegade
By the age of seven, Harry Potter hated his home, his relatives and his life. However, an ancient demonic artefact has granted him the powers of a Fallen and now he will let nothing stop him in his quest for power. AU: Slight Xover with Dresden Files
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3473224/1/The-Denarian-Renegade
Link: http://patronuscharm.net/s/20/1/
DLP-Thread: https://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?t=5482


The Denarian Knight
Sequel to The Denarian Renegade: Harry, the new and reluctant Knight of the Cross, finds himself fighting against new enemies as he is dragged into conflict. He will have to use all of his power to overcome new obstacles, some more surprising than others.
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3856581/1/The-Denarian-Knight
Link: http://patronuscharm.net/s/54/1/
DLP-Thread: https://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?t=8904


The Denarian Lord
Lord Voldemort readies for war while Albus Dumbledore seeks peace- through any means necessary. At the same time, Harry Potter moves to eradicate the Order of Blackened Denarius. In the middle of this is the Winter Lady, whose motives remain unknown...
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4359957/1/The-Denarian-Lord
Link: http://patronuscharm.net/s/209/1/
DLP-Thread: https://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?t=10038


The Denarian Variation
Set after The Denarian Lord: Eight years after Harry killed Voldemort, the last Denarian Lord is surprised to find Amanda Carpenter begging for his help. They had come and taken her daughter away. As Harry fights to get her back, Albus has his own plan...
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5879832/1/The-Denarian-Variation
DLP-Thread: https://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?t=15825


The Denarian Apocalpyse
Fourth Book in the Denarian Series: Harry Potter. Albus Dumbledore. Lord Voldemort. The machinations and plots of these three wizards have had unseen consequences that are, now, only just beginning to catch up to the Wizarding World. They are coming...
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7184989/1/The-Denarian-Apocalpyse


The Denarian Omakes
A collection of omakes written by various authors. Credits go to Surarrin, Nuhuh and Taure. I hope you enjoy.
Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4355372/1/The-Denarian-Omakes




Checked by Minion, January 5, 2013
Added headers and links to the entire series

 

All I have to say is that technically that was not Harry's fifth year but his second year, since he has only spent two years in Hogwarts.

 

I only caught this mistake.

Should be ship.

 

Perhaps "from what he was used to" and "one".

Good to see the prologue out so fast I really can't wait to see what's the dealeo with Amaris.. the suspense... It burns.

 

at him several

Change the question mark into a period or put 'Why had things changed' at the beginning.


I really like this opening; it's a very interesting start, though I have a question. Why does the Order of Blackened Denarius hate Meciel and vise versa? I don't remember the reason. Also, I've only read the first DF's book if it's stated somewhere in the original series. >.>

 

There's no reason stated thus far, and Meciel is an original character. See Shezza, you're practically canon now!

 

So it begins.....I can't wait to see who gets owend next.

other then that with my poor writing skills I was not able to see anything that stuck out like a sore thumb so I think your good.

I hope to see Maeve get hers, at the risk of being shanked, I never really liked her in the books, and I don't like her here either. I wonder....will we ever see Mab?


Edit: And heres my sign.

 

*Coughs pointedly

http://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?p=216291#post216291

 

Where's Amaris?

 

In the Faerie realm?

 

"Fifth year" refers not the the number of years spent at the school, but is in fact the name of that year of schooling: the equivalent of the American "# Grade".

 

Great prologue. I especially liked the part where he burned the guy alive, and the whole cotton candy scene. Good job.

 

I am liking the direction you take this story sheeza. Perfect example of the most critical element of a sequel, go big or go home.

Rocky 4 is the poster child of what NOT to do when you make a sequal. Rocky all but has his gnards lobbed off and it leaves you thinking... "what the fuck was the point of the first three movies if it was all for naught?"

Denarian Lord, sounds like Harry's going big.

Looking forward to future updates

 

Can you not see the fucking post above you?

 

That would be true if it said "the fifth year" and not "his fifth year." The first states the year level, the second is how long he personally was in that school.

To give an example, I transferred last year to a university, when asked about my standing I would have said that I am a third year,a junior, or a first year transfer student. However, I would not have said that it was my third/junior year, but instead it was my first year as a transfer student.

It is silly semantics but it is the only thing that stuck out to me while reading.

 

Being tortured! In some hideous ritual, by Voldemort and Maeve!

 

And the Grinch, with his grinch-feet ice-cold in the snow,
Stood puzzling and puzzling: "How could it be so?
It came without ribbons! It came without tags!
"It came without packages, boxes or bags!"
And he puzzled three hours, `till his puzzler was sore.
Then the Grinch thought of something he hadn't before!
"Maybe Christmas," he thought, "doesn't come from a store.
"Maybe Christmas...perhaps...means a little bit more!"

 

Ummmm no?

I posted in the thread started by sheeza, i was the third person to do so.

Someone moved what I wrote to this thread.

In short, stop trying to pick a fight you insolent brat.

 

It's a high possibility, but the wizard that Maeve is working with may not even be Voldemort. All that was said about the wizard in DK's epilogue was that the wizard had 'gleaming eyes' and that he creeped Amaris out. That could describe a lot of wizards.

Hell, Shezza could even pull a page out from Deathly Hallows and introduce Grindelwald, an enemy that is not even on Harry's radar but that is seeking his death. Shezza could beef that up and have something like Grindlewald wants Harry out of the way because he is a threat, or he could want the coin for himself, using Meciel's power to start a Wizarding world war and create the Fourth Reich.

That's actually not a bad idea. It throws in a feeling of Castle Wolfenstein in the mix, or the motif from the first Hellboy movie with the last Nazis messing around with the occult to recreate the Third Reich and rule the world.

Thoughts, anybody?

 

The writing was as excellent as always. The plot movement was slow though. It wasn't bad, quite the opposite actually, but switching gears from the end of DK to this prologue was jarring. Looking forward to where it goes from here.