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Complete The Denarian Lord by Shezza 88 - M - Dresden Files

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by XxEnvyxX, Jun 29, 2008.

  1. XxEnvyxX

    XxEnvyxX Groundskeeper

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    Title: The Denarian Lord
    Author: Shezza88
    Rating: M
    Pairing: Harry/Amanda
    DLP-Category: The Alternates
    Chapters: 36
    Words: 245,544
    Updated: December 28, 2009
    Published: June 30, 2008
    Status: Complete
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4359957/1/The-Denarian-Lord
    Link: http://patronuscharm.net/s/209/1/

    Summary: Lord Voldemort readies for war while Albus Dumbledore seeks peace- through any means necessary. At the same time, Harry Potter moves to eradicate the Order of Blackened Denarius. In the middle of this is the Winter Lady, whose motives remain unknown...



    The prologue is up and I found it very entertaining, Harry is still Harry and likes to burn things and people. I liked the cotton candy scene. All in all a wonderful start for a new story that we all have I expectations for.

    Great work Shezza


    All Books of the Series:


    The Denarian Renegade
    By the age of seven, Harry Potter hated his home, his relatives and his life. However, an ancient demonic artefact has granted him the powers of a Fallen and now he will let nothing stop him in his quest for power. AU: Slight Xover with Dresden Files
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3473224/1/The-Denarian-Renegade
    Link: http://patronuscharm.net/s/20/1/
    DLP-Thread: https://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?t=5482


    The Denarian Knight
    Sequel to The Denarian Renegade: Harry, the new and reluctant Knight of the Cross, finds himself fighting against new enemies as he is dragged into conflict. He will have to use all of his power to overcome new obstacles, some more surprising than others.
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3856581/1/The-Denarian-Knight
    Link: http://patronuscharm.net/s/54/1/
    DLP-Thread: https://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?t=8904


    The Denarian Lord
    Lord Voldemort readies for war while Albus Dumbledore seeks peace- through any means necessary. At the same time, Harry Potter moves to eradicate the Order of Blackened Denarius. In the middle of this is the Winter Lady, whose motives remain unknown...
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4359957/1/The-Denarian-Lord
    Link: http://patronuscharm.net/s/209/1/
    DLP-Thread: https://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?t=10038


    The Denarian Variation
    Set after The Denarian Lord: Eight years after Harry killed Voldemort, the last Denarian Lord is surprised to find Amanda Carpenter begging for his help. They had come and taken her daughter away. As Harry fights to get her back, Albus has his own plan...
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5879832/1/The-Denarian-Variation
    DLP-Thread: https://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?t=15825


    The Denarian Apocalpyse
    Fourth Book in the Denarian Series: Harry Potter. Albus Dumbledore. Lord Voldemort. The machinations and plots of these three wizards have had unseen consequences that are, now, only just beginning to catch up to the Wizarding World. They are coming...
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7184989/1/The-Denarian-Apocalpyse


    The Denarian Omakes
    A collection of omakes written by various authors. Credits go to Surarrin, Nuhuh and Taure. I hope you enjoy.
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4355372/1/The-Denarian-Omakes




    Checked by Minion, January 5, 2013
    Added headers and links to the entire series
     
    Last edited by a moderator: Jan 5, 2013
  2. Necrule Paen

    Necrule Paen DLP Elite DLP Supporter

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    All I have to say is that technically that was not Harry's fifth year but his second year, since he has only spent two years in Hogwarts.
     
  3. Dark Belra

    Dark Belra Minister of Magic

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    I only caught this mistake.

    Should be ship.
     
  4. uriel

    uriel Seventh Year DLP Supporter

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    Perhaps "from what he was used to" and "one".

    Good to see the prologue out so fast :p I really can't wait to see what's the dealeo with Amaris.. the suspense... It burns.
     
  5. Inferis

    Inferis Second Year

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    at him several

    Change the question mark into a period or put 'Why had things changed' at the beginning.


    I really like this opening; it's a very interesting start, though I have a question. Why does the Order of Blackened Denarius hate Meciel and vise versa? I don't remember the reason. Also, I've only read the first DF's book if it's stated somewhere in the original series. >.>
     
  6. Aekiel

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    There's no reason stated thus far, and Meciel is an original character. See Shezza, you're practically canon now!
     
  7. Cruentus

    Cruentus Chief Warlock DLP Supporter

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    So it begins.....I can't wait to see who gets owend next.

    other then that with my poor writing skills I was not able to see anything that stuck out like a sore thumb so I think your good.

    I hope to see Maeve get hers, at the risk of being shanked, I never really liked her in the books, and I don't like her here either. I wonder....will we ever see Mab?


    Edit: And heres my sign.
     
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  8. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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  9. Cathal

    Cathal Sir Nils' Right Hand

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    Where's Amaris?
     
  10. Rehio

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    In the Faerie realm?
     
  11. Skeletaure

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    "Fifth year" refers not the the number of years spent at the school, but is in fact the name of that year of schooling: the equivalent of the American "# Grade".
     
  12. Hiasha

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    Great prologue. I especially liked the part where he burned the guy alive, and the whole cotton candy scene. Good job.
     
  13. loves2spooge69

    loves2spooge69 Looked into the void

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    I am liking the direction you take this story sheeza. Perfect example of the most critical element of a sequel, go big or go home.

    Rocky 4 is the poster child of what NOT to do when you make a sequal. Rocky all but has his gnards lobbed off and it leaves you thinking... "what the fuck was the point of the first three movies if it was all for naught?"

    Denarian Lord, sounds like Harry's going big.

    Looking forward to future updates
     
  14. Reyhkt

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    Can you not see the fucking post above you?
     
  15. Necrule Paen

    Necrule Paen DLP Elite DLP Supporter

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    That would be true if it said "the fifth year" and not "his fifth year." The first states the year level, the second is how long he personally was in that school.

    To give an example, I transferred last year to a university, when asked about my standing I would have said that I am a third year,a junior, or a first year transfer student. However, I would not have said that it was my third/junior year, but instead it was my first year as a transfer student.

    It is silly semantics but it is the only thing that stuck out to me while reading.
     
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  16. uriel

    uriel Seventh Year DLP Supporter

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    Being tortured! In some hideous ritual, by Voldemort and Maeve!
     
  17. Robo Jesus

    Robo Jesus High Inquisitor

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    And the Grinch, with his grinch-feet ice-cold in the snow,
    Stood puzzling and puzzling: "How could it be so?
    It came without ribbons! It came without tags!
    "It came without packages, boxes or bags!"
    And he puzzled three hours, `till his puzzler was sore.
    Then the Grinch thought of something he hadn't before!
    "Maybe Christmas," he thought, "doesn't come from a store.
    "Maybe Christmas...perhaps...means a little bit more!"
     
  18. loves2spooge69

    loves2spooge69 Looked into the void

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    Ummmm no?

    I posted in the thread started by sheeza, i was the third person to do so.

    Someone moved what I wrote to this thread.

    In short, stop trying to pick a fight you insolent brat.
     
  19. Dethklok

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    It's a high possibility, but the wizard that Maeve is working with may not even be Voldemort. All that was said about the wizard in DK's epilogue was that the wizard had 'gleaming eyes' and that he creeped Amaris out. That could describe a lot of wizards.

    Hell, Shezza could even pull a page out from Deathly Hallows and introduce Grindelwald, an enemy that is not even on Harry's radar but that is seeking his death. Shezza could beef that up and have something like Grindlewald wants Harry out of the way because he is a threat, or he could want the coin for himself, using Meciel's power to start a Wizarding world war and create the Fourth Reich.

    That's actually not a bad idea. It throws in a feeling of Castle Wolfenstein in the mix, or the motif from the first Hellboy movie with the last Nazis messing around with the occult to recreate the Third Reich and rule the world.

    Thoughts, anybody?
     
  20. Covil

    Covil Fourth Year

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    The writing was as excellent as always. The plot movement was slow though. It wasn't bad, quite the opposite actually, but switching gears from the end of DK to this prologue was jarring. Looking forward to where it goes from here.
     
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