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The Code by Aduro - T

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by redcat, Oct 7, 2008.

  1. redcat

    redcat Squib

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    Title: The Code
    Author: Aduro
    Rating: T
    Genre: Adventure/Drama
    DLP Category: General (?)
    Pairing: No Slash / No Pairing (there will be, but not until the third book)
    Status: Complete
    Summary: Takes place in an alternate sixth year. Draco has a secret: he is a wizarding genius and is being pressured to take the Dark Mark. Bill Weasley got a job teaching Ancient Runes at Hogwarts, but he too has a secret: he is spying for the Order. What happens when these two discover each others secrets? Can they help each other survive the year?

    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2750775/1/The_Code

    It's not Harry-centric, but I did some lurking and found a Bella-centric, so I hope it's okay.

    I give it a 4.9/5 out of principal that nothing is perfect
     
  2. Kensington

    Kensington Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    I'm hardly the authority here...but a Draco-centric story?

    Peddle that shit to the fangirls.
     
  3. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    The writing is good. Every other aspect isn't...

    The male bonding

    expressed ad nauseum is like an extremely ghetto version of Starsky and Hutch. The plot of Code Breaker, from the summary, was too apparent a ripoff of Windwakers/Windtalkers, with Nicholas Cage.

    The only way it gets about a 1/5 from me is if this turns out to be a massive parody and every single character reveals that they are geniuses, causing Draco to suffer an anuerism.
     
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  4. Memory King

    Memory King Order Member DLP Supporter

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    Never been a fan of Draco Malfoy, which is why I never read the story when I stumbled on the link in the past.

    Will definitely be keeping an eye on this thread.
     
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  5. knothead

    knothead Groundskeeper

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    So that means there will be slash in a future book? If so, automatic fail.

    I tried to read the first chapter, but couldn't for the following reasons:

    1. Draco just isn't interesting enough to be a lead character.
    2. The best Einstein!Harry stories have gotten pretty old.
    3. The worst Einstein!Harry stories suck.
    4. Einstein!Draco sucks even worse than the worst Einstein!Harry.

    No rating.
     
  6. Gizmore

    Gizmore Minister of Swedish Affairs DLP Supporter

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    LolTroll!!!
     
  7. Dirk Diggory

    Dirk Diggory Seventh Year

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    Do not want
     
  8. maidros

    maidros Fourth Year

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    That was my gut reaction as well, but I recollect a thread discussing Draco's possible achievements (academic achievements, that is). Trouble is - JKR has done a lot to show him as the spoilt rich kid who spent his time bullying others that it is hard to come up a credible anything else. I will try to read through the stuff, but I am not comfortable with a genius!Draco.
     
  9. h2o

    h2o Professor

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    Draco as a wizarding genius? No. Just no. Draco is a pathetic little piece of shit with no backbone who likes to bully people. Also he's a crap wizard.
     
  10. MofoNofo

    MofoNofo Seventh Year

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    Excellent update date. Send it to hell, whence it came!
     
  11. Freelancer

    Freelancer Fourth Year

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    The first thought after I had read the summary of the story is how long it will take until DLP population destroy this thread.

    A Draco-centric fin with "The male bonding"? I am not going to rate it because I am not going to read it, but I doubt it would make anywhere besides the The Recycling Bin.
     
  12. Bratling

    Bratling Professor

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    My interest in redeeming Draco Malfoy? Nil. My interest in reading a Draco-centric story? -10.
     
  13. Swimdraconian

    Swimdraconian Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    Do not pass go.

    Do not collect $200.

    Just delete this fucking thing.

    No recycle bin for you. That would imply there is something in this fic worth saving. There isn't.
     
  14. Magus

    Magus Groundskeeper

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    From what I understand, this fic will be catching a bad case of "the slash."

    It must be purged before our glorious DLP library can be infected.

    Oh, and its also complete shit. 1/5.
     
  15. Tinn Tam

    Tinn Tam Review Goddess Retired Staff

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    Just for the sake of giving it a real chance, I'm leaving the thread up 'til tomorrow. If anyone is interested in actually reading the fic and giving a review (flames are obviously accepted), please do so.

    On the other hand, if all we're going to get is a collection of "I'm not getting anywhere near this fic even with a mile-long pole, an armour and a gas mask", then it'll get tossed in the Trash Bin. No need to have that lying about for a week.

    In the meantime, if you want to post, bringing new elements to the thread would be hugely appreciated. My boredom reached abysmal depths while reading it -- if it gets any deeper I'll be finding oil.
     
  16. Knox

    Knox The Last Remnant DLP Supporter

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    I read like five minutes into it and clicked the X on the corner of the screen, then screamed cause I had like seven other tabs open. That is how much this fails. Its not to say the writing and what not is fail, just that the premise is fail. Does this seem like 'The potter tradition of red" to anyone else? Dah mods and Admins are tricking us.
     
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  17. Naga's Shadow

    Naga's Shadow Seventh Year

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    Honestly I liked this story and am still reading the third one. Its quite old you know, but DLP material... Just because you like it doesn't mean it belongs in the library.
     
  18. Memory King

    Memory King Order Member DLP Supporter

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    BTW, the series turns out D/G, in case anyone didn't want to know.
     
  19. knothead

    knothead Groundskeeper

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    Draco/George? Draco/Gilderoy? Draco/Goyle? Draco/Grawp? Draco/Giant Squid? Draco/Griphook? Draco/Gobstones?

    (yes, I'm a bit loopy...)
     
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  20. Memory King

    Memory King Order Member DLP Supporter

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    You missed Draco/Goblet of Fire.

    What an intriguing way to become a Triwizard Champion.
     
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