Title: Inverted
Author: Potteraholic
Rating: M
Genre: Alternate
Pairing: Harry/Ginny
Link: Here

"AU. When Unspeakables Harry and Ginny Potter stumble upon a mysterious antique device, they are transported to an alternate world very different from their own." Authors Summary

They are put into 14/15 year old bodies of there other selves. Parents and older sister alive. The world where Albus Dumbledore traveled together with Gellert Grindelwald and studied under Flammel, before Dumbledore took out Grindelwald, and became the leader of a Light Cult, and adopted Tom Riddle, who becomes Headmaster, some basics of the story, as well chapter 6 giving some details on how Dumbledore survived his duel with Riddle.

 

Two things:

1) A link would be advisable.

2) You should know that Harry/Ginny stories generally have an uphill climb to get into the Library. Any reasons why you think this story is so special?

 

Linking to a story is usually recommended.

 

After that, I wanted to click the x button, but I moved on.

Again, my mouse wanted to go for the x button.

Woo! What does this button do?=> X

1/5

 

Fixed. Harry Potter fics seem to be dying out, and the regular garbage is getting regurgitated. DLP must hold!!!!!

 

You Shall Not PASS!....into the library

Read some of the first chapter as I am bored shitless, this made it worse.

 

Mostly just liked the Dumbledore, the Light leader side of things, the mental linking, and the fact Ginny is involved sucked, but the amount of new fics is getting smaller.

 

I can barely read it. The writing is so mechanical, but the plot line seems good.

 

The idea for the story was worth a 3. Add in the deus ex Ginsluttia plot device (fucking up the idea horribly) and you're down to a 1.

 

Potteraholic is another one of those authors that begs the question of what should go in the library. I will pass on commenting on this story other than to say I will be reading. "Aspirations" his first story Has some of the traits to enter the DLP library, but has a bunch of flaws that will keep it out.

 

In english means:

1/5.

Who the fuck names them self, Potteraholic?

 

^ A 12 year old girl,obviously.

 

0/5. I really don't know why I bothered reading it. Also, I think I've seen the name Potteraholic on here before though I might be thinking of a different forum.

 

Dialogue is pure, unadulterated shit. As is pretty much everything else about it.

 

I think this story and the other one by Potteraholic are a waste of bandwidth and network storage. The writing is poor and the pairing is an affront to good sense.

 

The dialogue really sucks in this story. And the relationship between Harry and Ginny is annoying as fuck.

Harry should get together with the Riddle girl and his hot sister. If that happened the story would still suck but it would make it more bearable.

1/5

 

0/5 We must hold the line, behind us is Moscow.
No honestly, what the fuck is this?