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WIP The Unexpected Result Of. . .

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Karenai, Aug 6, 2009.

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  1. Karenai

    Karenai Backtraced

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  2. MattSilver

    MattSilver The Traveller

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    Oh yeah, cause we all love a fourteen year old Harry with an eight year old Gabrielle having overly smutty sex.

    Nothing new in this fic, really. Just the same ol' Harry gets a bunch of sexy slaves under him, like Parvati, Hermione, Tonks, Luna et cetera. Didn't see Daphne, but I really didn't look THAT far into it.

    1/5 from me.
     
  3. Red

    Red High Inquisitor DLP Supporter

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    Iirc, this fic was alraedy put up for review some time ago. And it sucked then too.
    1/5
     
  4. Karenai

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    And i'm sure you lot have read it. Care to explain what happens?
     
  5. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    The trolls are getting (marginally) smarter.

    Now they wait until the admins are offline before they start working.
     
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    Upset we don't care for your masturbation material?

    Fine, here's a brief summary: Chapter 1 has Gabrielle visit Harry and bond to him. They have sex, she starts calling him "Master". Chapter 2, they have sex again, multiple times. Chapter 3 has Lavender, Parvati, Hannah, Susan, Hermione and some girl name Vicky join up the sex slave business. Blah blah, there's no plot beyond the smut.

    But that's just my honest opinion! Please don't get all angry and stuff (That's sarcasm, genius).
     
  7. Karenai

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    NOO RAWR MY SMUT T_T
     
  8. Mercenary

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    Its a troll. Seriously 7 posts?
     
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    jaspernoone First Year

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    second someone started sayin 14yo harry rootin around i felt like a sleazy pedo...hmmm, i need a shit load more booze, my morals are still her in ma head....
     
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    I dunno, this would probably highly appeal to some members of this board. Custer most likely.

    From me? Feels a bit too much like child porn. (which is technically is, just written)
     
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    Randeemy Headmaster DLP Supporter

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    This isnt me playing into the hands of a troll, rather questioning why people read and write this shit. I assume people read fanfiction for entertainment and to re-live the Harry Potter universe, or at least thats why I do. I cannot for the life of me work out how this fic satisfies either of those.
     
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    Oz For Zombie. Moderator DLP Supporter

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    Tinn Tam Review Goddess Retired Staff

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    This story is listed in "Read This Before Posting Stories - Important Information", formerly known as "Read This Before Posting Or I'll Kick Your Ass!".

    In case you don't know, it means it was posted once and was collectively vomited.

    Therefore:

    Locked.
     
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