Still, I find it curious, that in every fic i've read so far, that Harry after a few month's or sometime close to that, seems to be skilled enough to defeat Voldie. Now I find it strange that a teenager with a few months (some stories a few years) has enough skill to win against an adult with around 50 years of constant training.

And i know some will say that he spend most of that time looking for a way to become immortal, but anyway, it just irks me in most stories.. I've got nothing against Super!Harry fic's(I even like them), but you can't catch up on 5 decades of experience in a few months/years.

Ontopic again , I hope your still planning on continuing this story, I seem to remember enjoying it so...

 

You have a really good story keep it comming

 

In the frist chapter when harry was draging his trunk you said drunk

 

You seem none to bright, my young friend? You just necro-posted on a subject, for a useless bit of info that we all knew. Yes, we all knew this story has had horrible spelling/grammar, and if you would have read the damn thread you would know this.

As you are knew, my wrath is being held back, but I would advise you watch yourself, as Fire and Brimstone shall probably be landing down on your head soon....

The other members of this site,(Including I) don't appreciate necro-posting. But mayhaps you don't know what Necro-posts are. If this is the case, I highly suggest that you read the FAQ's and Stickies. I am sure that if you would have made an intro thread, you would have already been told to do this.

If this is indeed the case, you my friend are a complete and utter fucktard, no exception.

If this is not the case, I would highly suggest you do as I said and read the Rules/FAQ's/Stickes and try to redeem yourself later on. Acts like these do not leave a good impression, and you might wanna lay low for awhile, and pray none of the other members see this thread....

-Void

 

It was rushed, the grammar is questionable, and the spelling needs some work. Not that I'm a master at the subject. Ignoring that though, i think this idea could be very good. I'm just glad Harry didn't end up going to japan, or buying a damn katana. I hate those damn swords.

 

LOOOOOOL. There's nothing I hate more than chatspeak in a damned fic. Griphook apparently uses MSN a lot :/

 

u an ur and that shit at least isn't anywhere as near as bad as Harry going: LOL Ginny, I lmao at that, jk.

 

I'm not exactly sure how this was kept in the Library in the first place.

It's only four chapters, obviously abandoned.

Spelling and Grammar needs work. There are numerous cliches that are now certainly common, this is a story that has not aged well. Harry all of a sudden becomes Super!Harry. Also, A/Ns outside of the beginning or end.

Let me sum up this entire story with a few quoted parts:

Really? Sirius was the father he never had?

Harry lives with a drunk?

Thingy..

EvilDumbles! Rawr!

There you go Harry, you don't think Voldemort might feel the same way?

*Facepalm* I don't think I'll make you the reader suffer more. However, to insure that my 1/5 for this story is justified for those who don't read the story but reading this:

That's right, $329 billion galleons or roughly $1.5 trillion dollars.

*Major facepalm* 1/5, and get this shit out of the library.

 

There physically isn't that much gold in the world.

 

Exactly my point. I'd like to know where the number even came from. Was it just a random thing or was it all planned out?

 

What do you think? [/sarcasm]

But yeah, the story is shit now. People were just so desperate for Dark!Harry way back when that even trash made it into the library. Of course, it doesn't help that DLP's standards have steadily risen throughout the years. It does make me wonder how this even got in the library in the first place, though. It couldn't have been that good when it was first published, right?

 

Stories were all probably Harry/Ginny back then, and this was the only DarkHarry! work better than the rest back then.

Or it was added by a blind person, either way it sucks.