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Almost Recommendable Volume the Third

Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by Antivash, Aug 11, 2010.

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  1. Anarchy

    Anarchy Half-Blood Prince DLP Supporter

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    Maybe Grand Dragon Moody will make an appearance as well.
     
  2. T3t

    T3t Purple Beast of DLP ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    I found Cassiel's fic near-unreadable, unfortunately.

    This isn't terrible, though YMMV.


     
  3. Trooper

    Trooper Death Eater

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    This is pretty good. It was an enjoyable read for just the 3 chapters that are posted. I could frankly see it being 4/5 quality if it improves in some small areas. To tell the truth, I found it more enjoyable than Calz's Mentor!Flitwick fic. >_>

    And the changes the author has made to History of magic and the dueling system are kinda refreshingly new.

    I'll give it a definite 3/5 now hoping it actually improves to 4/5.
     
  4. Arrowjoe

    Arrowjoe Auror

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    It's alright, but the mood whiplashes a bit throughout.

    3/5
     
  5. AAli

    AAli High Inquisitor DLP Supporter

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    I like this one, bit early at the moment but its a Mercenary!Harry story.
     
  6. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    Lol, author went overboard in trying to make Harry seem the cool, impassive, disinterested type. No good.
     
  7. Jormungandr

    Jormungandr Prisoner

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    Was thinking about rec'ing that earlier today.

    Something about that story just appeals to me.
     
  8. silverlasso

    silverlasso Minister of Magic DLP Supporter

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    I agree with Andromalius in that the author went overboard in some respects, but I'm willing to wait and see how this evolves before letting it go. Depending on how the next few chapters play out, this could end up becoming fairly good.
     
  9. Jormungandr

    Jormungandr Prisoner

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    Deprived was updated a few days back - still a set up for a big confrontation, nothing major.

    Am strangely looking forward to seeing Harry/Hate stomping those people 'to the curb'.

    Also, hope there's some 'Templar'/Valkyrie action sometime later in the story, because I'm just a perv' like that.
     
  10. Schadenfreude

    Schadenfreude Fourth Year

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    Agreed. I will be very disappointed if Harry gets over it and forgives them instead, which really happens far too often.
     
  11. SKsniper128

    SKsniper128 Fifth Year

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    I think he might be talking about the Mercenaries rather than the Family.

    -SK
     
  12. H_A_Greene

    H_A_Greene Unspeakable –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    Yep, reccing my own fics here :fire

     
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  13. Alraune

    Alraune Seventh Year

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    Oruma mentioned pages way back that the link to Black Widow broke, I just found a new one to it just the other day.

    Black Widow
     
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  14. Oruma

    Oruma Order Member

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    Glad you found it. I lol'ed at the last line.
     
  15. T3t

    T3t Purple Beast of DLP ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    So far on chapter 4 and it's nothing particularly new, but it's at least mildly interesting and definitely readable.
     
  16. bob99

    bob99 High Inquisitor

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    Soul Thief » reviews 5 Years after defeating Voldemort, a simple error of judgment leads to catastrophe for Harry Potter. Hermione has to battle to reclaim her dearest friend and Harry must uncover the conspiracy that threatens them all in order to save a once bitter enemy.Harry Potter - Rated: M - English - Mystery/Romance - Chapters: 26 - Words: 148,931 - Reviews: 187 - Updated: 12-10-10 - Published: 11-15-10 - Harry P. & Hermione G. - Complete

    Harry Potter is tasked with saving Draco Malfoy from the Dementor's kiss when Draco is framed for murder.

    This is an engaging and well written Post-Hogwarts story. Unfortunately Harry is too emotional and the ending is disapointing.
     
  17. Rhys

    Rhys High Inquisitor

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    1. Correspondence Uninterrupted » reviews A minor change can lead to much greater ones. Harry is able to respond to his Hogwarts letter, leading him along a very different path. Year One.Harry Potter - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 13 - Words: 61,345 - Reviews: 86 - Updated: 10-14-11 - Published: 7-29-11 - Harry P.

    A surprisingly decent Year One rehash, with a good amount of new content mixed in. This fairly serious story is a far cry from BaJaB's crack-fic Hufflepuff!Harry. Pointless bashing and many related cliches are absent, though this Harry is generally more competent than the canon version. It doesn't break any new ground, but I think it was a success for what it intended to do.
     
  18. Dark Minion

    Dark Minion Bright Henchman DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Damn. I should have waited a few minutes before I closed this thread.

    50 pages are a reason to move forward:
    Don't forget to tune in for the next installment of Almost Recommendable - Round Four
     
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