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Harry with a backbone

Discussion in 'Story Search' started by AMG, Nov 28, 2015.

  1. AMG

    AMG Disappeared

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    Looking for fics which have Harry who stand up for himself, smart, and does not bow down to the likes of Snape, Dumbledore, not afraid to use lethal curses or kill. Basically looking for HP similar to the one in The Lie I've lived.
     
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  2. 6foxtrot9

    6foxtrot9 First Year

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    I am making these recommendations assuming that you do not want full indie Harry with evil manipulative Dumbledore. That said, it has been a rather long while since I read The Lie I've Lived so your mileage may vary.

    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8379655/1/Hogwarts-Battle-School

    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4985330/1/The-Other-Boy-Who-Lived By the same author, I was unhappy at the ending, but the journey was enjoyable.

    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3473224/1/The-Denarian-Renegade While this does fit the bill, I think a lot of it is just him being immature (which is not a mistake of the writing, it was intended that way).

    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6256154/1/The-Unforgiving-Minute From memory there was little interaction with established authority figures, but it fits every other bill.

    Tell me if I missed the mark or if you need me to keep going.
     
  3. AMG

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    I just went through Hogwarts Battle School and two chapters in and Harry is dominated by Draco and Ron of all people in conversations and loses to Granger in a duel. Quite frankly Harry is a pussy and not what I'm looking for. Will take a look at the others.

    Read the first chapter of the other boy who lived and Granger is dominating all over Harry even though he too his a prefect and Neville is basically Canon!Harry. Yeah No.

    I've read the Denerian Rengeade and didn't like the way the author forces him to go to Hogwarts or how he forces Harry to bow down to Dumbledore.

    Read The Unforgiving Minute Harry is too angsty and he dies in the end.
     
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  4. Plotless

    Plotless High Inquisitor

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    Denarian trilogy starts here.

    HP & the BWL can be found at WBA if you sort by rating.

    Wastelands of Time and its sequel are among my favourites in the fandom.

    These are pretty much within the top % of fanfiction, so you may have read some of them.
     
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    Chadrew Second Year

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    I don't know about the others, but you have to give it time. The author starts with a characterization of Harry which is not too far from normal HP books and then deviate the more the story goes.

    Reading your last comment, it seems like you are definitely looking for typical indy!Harry with instant power up and change of personality without any foreshadowing. Just browse the Dark Arts and Alternate section of the library or use the tag and you'll find them easily enough
     
  8. Ankan

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    No no no no, please go away.
     
  9. Alindrome

    Alindrome A bigger, darker mark DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    I agree. Judging by the taste here, OP might be well served by browsing the older library entries (from 2007 - 2011, I'd say), and don't neglect the recycling bin.

    I recommend The Nightmare Man by Tiro if you want something recent. It's not Indy!Harry but rather about a powerful dark Harry and is one of the more interesting examples of the genre out there.
     
  10. ahiorth

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    Harry Crow i guess if your looking for a story where harry doesn't take shit from anyone.
     
  11. James

    James Unspeakable

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    ^ hahahahaha

    Brilliant recommendation.
     
  12. Ashton Knight

    Ashton Knight Disappeared DLP Supporter

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    I...actually think this is a trollpost. The OP has literally just described 40% of the clichés in he fandom.

    P.S: I have nothing against The Lie I've Lived.
     
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