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Harry assassinating / cutting down Death Eaters

Discussion in 'Story Search' started by Socialist, Sep 11, 2016.

  1. Socialist

    Socialist Professor

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    As per the title. I've been slowly getting back into fanfiction this past week, after a two-year break. Haven't found anything worthwhile matching my criteria however.

    The only real requirement, apart from the stated one, is semi-competent writing. Hit me up.
     
  2. Morde

    Morde Second Year

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  3. Puzzled

    Puzzled High Inquisitor

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    Hogwarts Strike Team had quite a lot of murder before it petered out and landed in almost recommended.
     
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  7. Methos

    Methos High Inquisitor DLP Supporter

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    DobbyElfLord might have the answer for you with.

    The Sniper
    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3918135/1/The-Sniper

    OneShot: Harry is expelled after the hearing in Courtroom 10. His wand snapped, an angry Harry choses his own path forward. First person story focusing on Harry's effort to find his own place.Rated: Fiction T - English - Adventure - Harry P. - Words: 12,473 - Reviews: 520 - Favs: 3,903 - Follows: 827 - Published: Nov 29, 2007 - Status: Complete - id: 3918135

    It is also recommended to check all DobbyElfLord stories.


    Another story:
    Rise Of The PhoenixBy: James SpookieThe Aurors, already stretched thin from the war against Voldemort, now have a serial killer to deal with, as well as a vigilante in black dragon hide. What does the return of Sirius Black have to do with it all?Rated: Fiction M - English - Adventure/Crime - Harry P., Sirius B., Lisa T. - Chapters: 8 - Words: 41,614 - Reviews: 143 - Favs: 316 - Follows: 500 - Updated: Aug 18 - Published: Jan 24 - id: 11750859

    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11750859/1/Rise-Of-The-Phoenix
     
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  9. Dark2leoj

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    Oh man i got just what you're looking for, Chapters 25+ and Harry is systematically capturing and using any method to gain information from high ranking Death Eaters. There is even a scene where Harry publicly decimates Lucius in a final singal attack( Chapter 23) , truly the epitome of what you're looking for. Other than that i like the plot and the smut is amazing.

    Story: 'For Love Of Magic'
    Link: https://m.fanfiction.net/s/11669575/1/
     
    Last edited: Dec 5, 2016
  10. silentclock

    silentclock Chief Warlock DLP Supporter

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    Got a link?
     
  11. Dark2leoj

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  12. Dn18

    Dn18 Third Year

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    I actually just finished this and it was quite good. The author writes well, has interesting characters and the story kept my interest. The first chapter had a lot of setup but the story finds its stride soon after.

    With that said something to keep in mind with this story. This author enjoys writing smut. I mean really enjoys it. Its mostly relevant to the story and especially in the begiining was related to a major plot point but later on some chapters had like 1/4 to 1/3 of it being smut and didnt really matter to the plot. The scenes are easy enough to skip but can get annoying.

    Apart from that I did enjoy the story especially how Harry develops as a character and his interactions with others.
     
  13. Jibril

    Jibril Headmaster

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    The main problem with DobbyElfLord stories is that they have aged terribly. What do we have in the above one?
    - Order of the Fried Chicken
    - "shut up old man, I'm no longer under your rules"
    - Wizarding sheep
    - Muggles are awesome
    - Herry being Metamorphmagus
    - Voldemort getting shot by a sniper rifle

    I wouldn't call that a good writing.
     
  14. Alindrome

    Alindrome A bigger, darker mark DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    An old favourite of mine, although it perhaps won't have aged well:

    Time, Mr. Potter?
    The Wizarding World falls to darkness, and Harry frantically attempts to gather the Horcruxes before Voldemort finishes him off entirely. When he is captured and attempts to escape, he is blasted back into his twelve year old body. He promptly screws up the timeline.
    DLP Review Thread

    My memory is a little foggy, but I'm pretty sure Harry in this story does a lot of literal cutting down death eaters.
     
  15. Dark2leoj

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    The smut in the story is fantastic haha, thats where its at. The last 2 chapters have been strictly business with this whole vampire coven thing going on.
     
  16. Dn18

    Dn18 Third Year

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    It is well written smut I grant you but its just not something I am interested in. I am not offended by it or anything I just find it incredibly boring and it detracts from the meat of the story imo.
     
  17. Dark2leoj

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    Well i think it enhances the story, alas, you cannot please everyone.
     
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