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Abandoned While the Lily white shall in love delight by Vash - NC17

Discussion in 'Restricted Section' started by Antivash, Mar 4, 2006.

4.5/5, 6 votes
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  1. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Apr 17, 2006 #61
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    Chapter five is now up. feel free to question or flame as you like. Ill take it all in stride.
     
  2. Scarty

    Scarty Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    Apr 17, 2006 #62
    Wooh New Chapter, that's cool.

    I like it, good as every chapter in my opinion.
     
  3. Mordecai

    Mordecai Drunken Scotsman –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    Apr 17, 2006 #63
    Better than the last chapter methinks. The mention of how his magical core has changed is interesting, is it that the use of evil magic has twisted? Or is the Adoption thing? Or perhaps a slow side effect of what happened in the room?

    Anywa, nice update, hope its this soon again.
     
  4. Aekiel

    Aekiel Angle of Mispeling ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Apr 17, 2006 #64
    I'm glad you thought up some good curses. Unforgivables get so boring, so quickly. Twas a good chapter, even if I'm not a big fan of big, bad, evil Harry. Is it gonna be an evil!Harry or just a dark!Harry?
    Aekiel
     
  5. Promios

    Promios Fourth Year

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    Apr 17, 2006 #65
    This chapter was MUCH better! Loved it.
     
  6. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Apr 18, 2006 #66
    I still think Greyback eating him was better... >_<
     
  7. sephiroththebrokenangel

    sephiroththebrokenangel Fourth Year

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    Apr 18, 2006 #67
    New chapter

    Ok I finally got around to reading the new chapter and damn the fic really picked up now, that was an excellent job Vash, nice and gory :twisted:
     
  8. Bungler

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    I realy like this story, good writing, original plot and one of the best semi evil Harry's I've read. Hope you keep up the good work :D
     
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