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Quality Naruto fics

Discussion in 'Story Search' started by Inert, Feb 17, 2012.

  1. Eilyfe

    Eilyfe Supreme Mugwump

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    Eh, can't say I've ever seen
    Sasuke being mortified over his own beauty and, subsequently, over his daughter's
    done in the fandom before. It was an easy and nice read, and it stopped at the right moment. 6.4k is an enitrely appropriate wordcount for the idea.

    4/5
     
  2. crimson sun06

    crimson sun06 Order Member

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    I was talking about
    The overprotective father, supportive mother, wife always having an upper hand in arguments not to mention the husband being intimidated by the wife cliches
    And the original idea only paid off at the end... which admittedly is a funny conclusion.
     
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  3. gundam_wizard

    gundam_wizard Fourth Year

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    Oh my god, another insanely overprotective dad story.:facepalm:facepalm Bugger that for a game of ninjas.
     
  4. Baradine

    Baradine Seventh Year

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    Don't be such a faggot.
     
  5. crimson sun06

    crimson sun06 Order Member

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    Wow...Did you actually come up with that piece of gem all by yourself or did you have help?
     
  6. Baradine

    Baradine Seventh Year

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    All by myself. Now stop worrying about being politically correct and post what you want.
     
  7. crimson sun06

    crimson sun06 Order Member

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    I have been doing that so stop worrying about my non-existent worries and let this be the end of that, 'cause after all the shit Alexx has been posting it'd be a shame if I am the reason we have a new thread in the HoS.
     
  8. Mutton

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    The story is basically a love letter to Zoolander; I don't know where you're getting gay from.
     
  9. crimson sun06

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    I refer you to the first paragraph of the spoiler in my first post on the topic.
     
  10. The Mysterious Nobody

    The Mysterious Nobody Auror

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    Small Changes by Digitize27 has been discontinued, along with all his Naruto stories. It was alright as a time waster, even if nothing to write home about. The reason he's quitting the fandom seems quite shitty, but oh well.
     
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  11. Mutton

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    You really need to watch Zoolander
     
  12. LPriest

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    Reading these post-war chapters has me really wanting a Sarada centric "fix it" fic. The horrors she'd face watching her parents interact, the colossal disappointment young Naruto would be to anyone raised around him when he's apparently the best ever.

    I'd also like to see a fic where the person trying to fix everything was completely unaware of what really happened. She learned all this stuff in the class room and Konoha probably rewrites its history on a monthly basis. I doubt things like Root or that time an acting Hokage was assassinated by rogue konoha-nin made it into "Stabbing people, a retrospective" or whatever they name their history books.
     
  13. Jarik

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    So this story has been recommended a couple of times in the Other Fandoms Almost Recommendable thread, but hasn't really had much discussion since then.

    The concept is that a young Sakura is forcibly recruited into being a spy by Kabuto. It features a terrified, victimized Sakura basically developing into being a competent, but disillusioned shinobi through her role as that spy. It is currently one of my favourite currently updating Naruto fics too.

    It reminds me in feel to that Hermione-reincarnated-into-Sakura fic, Effloresco Secundus, so if you enjoyed that one I'd recommend this. If your first response to reading this story will be "How come Naruto isn't the main character", I'd recommend you don't bother wasting your time.

    I've loved the last two chapters a lot. In particular, seeing how Kakashi has interacted with her the whole time was really heart warming. That acceptance of her betrayal, but still acknowledging that her as his wayward student that he cares for.

    I'm interested to see how this new status and situation she's in will play into her interactions with everyone. It puts her in an interesting position for that. Orochimaru being a troll is fun too.
     
  14. Peter North

    Peter North Dark Lord

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    Does Naruto have any interaction with her all?
     
  15. Republic

    Republic The Snow Queen –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    So... Why should I read about traitor Sakura? At least try to sell it a bit.
     
  16. Peter North

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    I'm giving it a try. So far it's well written, and I can kind of see the interest in it. Sakura is a scared little girl and she is betraying the village to protect herself. I am hoping that by the third or fourth chapter things pick up. If your bored and have nothing else to read I'd recommend this fic.
     
  17. Mutton

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    It's not really traitor Sakura but more hostage Sakura (in that she really doesn't have a choice). But it isn't that angsty about it, while still getting the stress across. Plus it has one of the best Ochimarus around.
     
  18. Republic

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    I checked the first chapter. It's definitely traitor Sakura.

    Edit: Mobile OP.
     
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  19. Peter North

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    Sakura is terrified of Naruto after finding out that he is the 9 tails Jinchuriki.
     
  20. crimson sun06

    crimson sun06 Order Member

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    As far as reasons for enforcing a plot point goes... that ranks right up there with some of the most retarded things I've come across.

    EDIT: I seem to have misunderstood this. My bad.
     
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