So I posted a rough version of this story a while ago and slowly tweaked it into something I am fairly happy with in the WIP section. It is my first completed story and while it has its issues I still am glad I wrote it. I imagine anyone on here inclined to read this already has, but since I am half way through my next story I thought I'd see if I can get some more feedback on this one. It was a strange thing for me to write since its not really the kind of story I tend to read but there...
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