I'm pretty much writing a world from scratch, borrowing pieces of terminology from our world as I need and then trying to shift it to some degree, but the biggest piece I'm worrying over right now is the magic people can use, as well as the terms for that usage. I like it, but that doesn't mean its good. If you guys could critique it and just give the usual WBA-styled examination, I'd appreciate it. Energy System The basis of it is that the world my setting is taking place on has...
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