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  1. hruss
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    Good characterization and plot

    I've been working on a fic lately, but the characters seem unlikeable and the plot rather convoluted. Any suggestions on how to improve it? :D Rating: T Genre:Humor/Tragedy DLP Category: Independent Pairing: NIL Chapters: 9 Words: 18,107 Updated: October 14, 2013 Status: Work in Progress Summary: Meet Emma, the innately selfish Head Girl of Hogwarts at the height of Voldemort's reign, who tries to help in her own twisted way but most of the time just makes things worse. Meanwhile,...
    Thread by: hruss, Oct 14, 2013, 19 replies, in forum: Fanfic Discussion
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