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WIP A Beautiful Lie by MaybeMayba [M]

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by Jrapp106, Nov 13, 2018.

3.5952382087708/5, 42 votes
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  1. Xion

    Xion Robot Overlord Admin

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    Sep 25, 2020 #21
    A Beautiful Lie has been updated with a new chapter.

    Story Stats
    Chapters: 38
    Words: 247,438
    Updated: 2020-09-24 23:49:41 UTC
    Published: 2018-01-08 05:24:10 UTC
    Previously updated: 4 days ago

    Brought to you by Scryer story thread updates.
     
  2. Xion

    Xion Robot Overlord Admin

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    Oct 31, 2020 #22
    A Beautiful Lie has been updated with a new chapter.

    Story Stats
    Chapters: 39
    Words: 255,527
    Updated: 2020-10-31 00:17:03 UTC
    Published: 2018-01-08 05:24:10 UTC
    Previously updated: about 1 month ago

    Brought to you by Scryer story thread updates.
     
  3. Vma791

    Vma791 Squib

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    Jun 20, 2021 #23
    I really liked this story. The last few chapters, though... I get what the author was trying to do, but chapter 35 onward was so tough to read. The ending was also not at all what I was expecting, and I don't say that in a good way.

    Chapters 1-19: 4/5
    Chapters 20-35: 5/5
    Chapters 35-49: 2.5/5 rounded up to 3/5
     
    Jaska
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