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Complete A Brother's Betrayel by Chereche - T

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Goddessa39, Sep 12, 2011.

1.375/5, 24 votes
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  1. Fiat

    Fiat The Chosen One DLP Supporter

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    Sep 25, 2011 #21
    Really couldn't stand it. There's pretty much nothing I can say that other people haven't already elucidated better - just because angst is its category doesn't make it alright. It's exactly as bad as you'd expect, and deserves its rating. 1/5
     
  2. calutron

    calutron Unspeakable

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    Sep 25, 2011 #22
    I didn't cry or even fell bad for the protagonist after reading the story. Fail Angst.

    2/5 for mechanics
     
  3. anks

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    Sep 27, 2011 #23
    This has potential of being a decent story, If Harry's character in this story is changed to a girl and also if all the emotional trauma stuff is removed.
     
    Richard
  4. Goddessa39

    Goddessa39 DA Member

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    Oct 2, 2011 #24
    Bones

    Wow. I was suprised. It was angst, so there was much fuel for flames. It was a twin!Harry fic, but not exactly a wrong!bwl fic, so I thought there would be people who appreciated it as I did.

    I guess the only thing to do is...

    WANTED: Mean Bones
    REASON: I seem to have none.
    GLASSES: Rose-colored. AH well. I guess this is just another one for the reject pile.
     
  5. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    Oct 9, 2011 #25
    Yes, it is.
     
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