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A Consequence to Forever by koa-chan - Code Geass - K+

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Halcyon, Jul 27, 2011.

3/5, 5 votes
  1. Halcyon

    Halcyon First Year

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    Jul 27, 2011 #1
    Title: A Consequence to Forever
    Author: koa-chan
    Rating: K+
    Genre: Family/Drama
    DLP Category: Code Geass
    Pairing: Lelouch/C.C.
    Status: Complete (One Shot, though there are two "sequels")
    Summary: They once kept a cat and a little girl. But they were immortals - and it was one of the painful truths in their existence that sooner of later, no matter how many companions they gather, it'll end up to be just the two of them again.
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4972887/1/A_Consequence_to_Forever

    A particularly poignant oneshot dealing with the loneliness of immortality post-R2. I enjoyed it immensely. Though there were a few syntactical and grammatical errors (verb tense at times), the 'ambiance' of the fic more than made up for it.

    5/5 for me, though I'm curious to know what the hard-to-please DLP community thinks.
     
  2. KrzaQ

    KrzaQ Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    Jul 27, 2011 #2
    3/5 from me. Fairly entertaining, but I see no reason why give it 5, or even 4.
     
  3. Sin Saiori

    Sin Saiori Death Eater

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    Jul 27, 2011 #3
    Sad in concept, not so much in execution. Perhaps if it were a little more gripping...