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WIP A Monster's Marriage by Jiu-jitsu dude - T - RWBY

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by quixoticcool, Sep 26, 2018.

2.6666667461395/5, 6 votes
  1. quixoticcool

    quixoticcool Third Year

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    Sep 26, 2018 #1
    Title: A Monster's Marriage
    Author: Jiu-jitsu dude
    Rating: T
    Genre: Humor
    Status: In-Progress
    Pairings: Jaune/Cinder (?Adam/Blake?)
    Summary: She was a harbinger of darkness, a killer, a monster...and she was happily married to a man who had no idea.
    Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12986165/1/A-Monsters-Marriage

    One of those rare humor fics that's actually funny more often than not. The premise alone is hilarious but Jiu-jitsu dude really drives it home with some truly insane scenarios. I really don't want to spoil anything since humor lives by surprise so I wont summarize it. I will say that bits with the OC "Bane" tended to fall flat more frequently than others. Bits with Mercury and Jaune are my personal favorites.

    I give it a 4/5, it's damn funny and is set up to stay that way for awhile.
     
  2. Xion

    Xion Robot Overlord Admin

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    Nov 24, 2018 #2
    A Monster's Marriage has been updated with a new chapter.

    Story Stats
    Chapters: 12
    Words: 66,216
    Updated: 2018-11-24 20:02:24 UTC
    Published: 2018-06-30 15:50:16 UTC
    Previously updated: 28 days ago

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  3. Nazgoose

    Nazgoose The Honky-tonk ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter DLP Gold Supporter

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    Nov 25, 2018 #3
    Pretty average. Concept is fun, execution is just 100% mediocre. There are no real low notes, but also no high notes. It just... is.

    3/5
     
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