Well if you guys haven't heard the story's been somewhat regularly updated nowadays. And the writing's really picked up from those early chapters. Voldemort has made his debut as a Gaunt and is finally found going to play the role of cold politician that we awaited for. Harry or should I say Orion's influence in the slytherin house continues to grow while Hermione's on the verge of waging war against the pureblood's as a second year which I find a bit unbelievable. Though in the end the story's not too bad and shows promise to actually turn into a decent fanfic.

 

Gollum, you made it sound like it'd just been updated. I actually really like Harrys annoyance with Hermione yet I understand how Hermione is actually trying to fight the casual misconceptions and how Harry still has no idea how condescending he sounds even though he's muggle raised.