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Abandoned A Play with me by World - T

Discussion in 'General Fics' started by World, Apr 19, 2006.

  1. World

    World Oberstgruppenführer DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Sorry for the doublepost, but I think it's been long enough.

    Since I shall venture into Spain (Lloret de Mar for those who are interested and everyone else as well) for a week in two days, I have decided to present to you the last scene of act five.

    Sorry for the delay, but final exams and general lazyness have prevented me from writing this earlier.

    Anyway, criticism is always welcome.
     
  2. Skykes

    Skykes Minister of Magic DLP Supporter

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    eh i ca nt load the link but the idea sounds ok
     
  3. World

    World Oberstgruppenführer DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Yeah I just noticed that a few hours ago but since I can't edit my older posts I cannot change them. You can find it in Work by Author in this forum or on ffn.

    @Sree: Thanks
     
    Last edited: May 25, 2006
  4. Rahkesh Asmodaeus

    Rahkesh Asmodaeus THUNDAH Bawd Admin DLP Supporter

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    Yeah, I edited it World. :banana:
     
  5. ChuckDaTruck

    ChuckDaTruck Overlord

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    Whoa. Bold stuff, man.

    I am VERY impressed. Me likey mucho. (See I can be sophisticated too!:D )

    Anyway, Very cool. I gotta go grab some dinner, but....

    UPDATE SOON! ;)
     
  6. Myst

    Myst Headmaster

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    Wow, that was pretty amazing. Was nice to actually think for once in a fanfic. Good Job.
     
  7. World

    World Oberstgruppenführer DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Thanks all for the kind reviews. After many weeks, I have finally completed the first scene of act two. It's among the shortest of all scenes but it's just a transitionary chapter.
    I'm sure y'all like the next one though :angel:

    €dit: By the way, I was thinking that this probably should be moved out of the Azkaban!section as Azkaban really doesn't play that much of a role. I don't think it will be mentioned at any point after the first act.
     
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  8. World

    World Oberstgruppenführer DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    So, a new scene is done. We see some (that is, one) new and an old face, and a special little treat for you at the end :)

    Anyway, reviews and feedback are very much appreciated *begs*
     
  9. Ham

    Ham First Year

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    I am very impressed. The writing style is original and you have pulled it all off very well.

    It really pleases me to see someone doing something new.
     
  10. jaspernoone

    jaspernoone First Year

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    I'm never one to comment on a story unless I am very impressed or for some reason beleive it above distinction, but this story, was a pure stroke of genius, whilst having to read the greatist and most tragic love story of western civilisation Romeo and Juliet, Macbeth and now entering Hamlet, I found certain love for the style of writing you seem to be extremly adapt at writing.

    One of the biggest surprises i feel is that no-one has at all tried to write a story in a similar manner, as there are more then enough morons out there writing sugary crap that only other morons will enjoy, didn't try and write in such a way and would most likely of screwed it up completely. You seem to have neither screwed it up nor do you strike myself as the moron who only writes sugary crap.

    Thank you for a truly masterfuly well done peice of literature. I'll enjoy reading more.
     
  11. fantasyfreak

    fantasyfreak Fifth Year

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    wow that is a very good story and a great way of writing it pure brilliance
     
  12. Cervus

    Cervus Raptured to Hell

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    Excellent. Been a while since you updated but it was worth it in the end.
     
  13. Scrittore

    Scrittore Groundskeeper

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    To think earlier I was joking about a Shakespeare!Harry yet here it is. I think this is brilliant and enjoyed it. It is certainly original, well done, and well written overall. Easily a 5/5 in my book. World, if you read this, I say one thing, moar. :awesome
     
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