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About Remembering by hokiechick - R - HP/NT

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Amerision, Oct 22, 2006.

1.5714285373688/5, 7 votes
  1. Amerision

    Amerision Galactic Sheep Emperor DLP Supporter

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    Oct 22, 2006 #1
    Title: About Remembering

    Author: hokiechick
    Pairing: Harry/Tonks [Pseudo H/HR] with hints of previous H/G and RL/NT
    Genre: Erotica/Romance [Suggested for Restricted Section or Romance]
    Rating: R
    Status: ONESHOT

    Summary: The anniversary of Ginny's death. Harry remembers her with the help of a friend. R for explicit sexual content

    Link: http://www.ficwad.com/viewstory.php?sid=29321

    :::

    Review: It's a oneshot romance/smut between Harry and Tonks. Harry that thinks its Hermione who's 'comforting' him - Tonks likes, and wants to help him (and possibly herself) but feels that, and is saddened by the fact that, Harry would be more comfortable with 'Hermione'.

    3.5/5 -> 4/5 [Depending on reader preferences]

    EDIT: I'm seeing people aren't realizing this whole post was meant to be bashed. Really, don't read this.

    ...Unless you're into this kind of sappy, angsty stuff. Or are feeling in the bashing mood.
     
    Last edited: Oct 23, 2006
  2. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    Oct 22, 2006 #2
    What's with Harry always rooting Tonks when she looks like Hermione? It seems to be a little kink with Harry/Tonks smut writers.

    Anyway, I'ma read this later and give an opinion then.

    Edit:
    Lol. That shit is just poor. I found that fairly amusing.

    Second Edit:
    Lolololol. I feel sick.
     
  3. huntedorange

    huntedorange Seventh Year

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    Oct 22, 2006 #3
    well its ok for a laugh but to be honest i say trash can.
     
  4. Kai Shek

    Kai Shek Supreme Mugwump

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    Oct 22, 2006 #4
    Well, the smut was decent enough, but the dialogue...needs much work.

    3/5
     
  5. doc_gerbil

    doc_gerbil Sixth Year

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    Oct 22, 2006 #5
    ewwwwwwwwwwwww. "tonight is about remembering"? uuuuugh. thats just ucky. 2/5
     
  6. Nexus

    Nexus Denarii Host

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    Oct 22, 2006 #6
    I read this some time ago. Not worth the library in my opinion. I vote for Trash can.
     
  7. Inquisition

    Inquisition Canadian Ambassador to Japan DLP Supporter

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    Oct 22, 2006 #7
    1. Tonks. +1.
    2. Ginny is dead. +1.
    3. Using rubbish Rowling pairings. -2.
    4. Tonks as Hermione. -0.5.
    5. Harry loves Ginny. -1.5.

    Overall: 1.5/5.
     
  8. huntedorange

    huntedorange Seventh Year

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    Oct 22, 2006 #8
    eh this isnt about the story but where did that maths come from 1+1-2-.5-1.5 = -2 where did the 1.5/5 come from?
     
  9. Inquisition

    Inquisition Canadian Ambassador to Japan DLP Supporter

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    Oct 22, 2006 #9
    I started with 3.5, Amerision's lowest rating.
     
  10. Swimdraconian

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    Oct 22, 2006 #10
    Probably took off half a point for the sheer ridiculousness of this piece. As it is, I'll give it a 1/5 and a vote for the trash bin. I've read better than this.
     
  11. Amerision

    Amerision Galactic Sheep Emperor DLP Supporter

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    Oct 22, 2006 #11
    I love setting up fics for murder. :)
     
  12. Inquisition

    Inquisition Canadian Ambassador to Japan DLP Supporter

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    "But no one really knows what happened to the murderer or the murder weapon. They are still out there, but where? I'm Bill Curtis."
     
  13. Yarrgh!

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    Oct 23, 2006 #13
    Yeah, not such a good fic. I really can't stand having the female in a pairing be a useless, emotionally broken piece of ass.

    Not good at all, its a blight on HP/NT.

    0/5...if only it were possible.