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Acerbus Angelus by Dalyon - M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Zevrillion, Jul 20, 2005.

  1. Zevrillion

    Zevrillion Founder Retired Staff

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    Title: Acerbus Angelus
    Author: Dalyon
    Rating: M
    Category: Action/Adventure
    Summary: After running away from the Durselys at a young age, he learned to survive on his own. Faced by the cruelties of a harsh world, he fought for his freedom. Challenged by those above him, he killed for his power. Discovered by the world that betrayed him, he was forced to accept his destiny. But a person can change a lot over eleven years, and Harry Potter has become something they will never expect.
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2383709/1/
     
  2. Vecna

    Vecna Fourth Year

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    Good AU story, hope he updates often
     
  3. Midknight

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    Itd be an excellent fic, but the bit with the twin sister is a bit much.

    I've seen that often though, great AU ideas, that are dimished b/c they always make a forgotten brother/sister to fill Harry's shoes for the years at Hogwarts.
     
  4. LT2000

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    That and the whole thing of him being a feared and respected criminal (or whatever you want to call it) all over the world at the age of like ten or eleven is a bit ridiculous.
     
  5. True Story

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    He's fifteen in the story its his sisters fifth year and Children beign feared and respected criminals lol yo we have more child gunmen than adults here and in Africa armies are mostly comprise of children read up on the conflicts in Somalia and the congo.
     
  6. True Story

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    Child mob bosses? No. Gunmen? Yeah sure, why not?
     
  7. Vecna

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    i seem to remeber i book about i child crimelord, artemis fowler i think
     
  8. LT2000

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    Fifteen would have been cool, but the story seemed to imply that his reputation was one that he's had for a long time.
     
  9. Silke

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    As i understood it, someone before Harry called themselves Lutifer, that's why he was feared even from the beginning, though i guess i could've read it wrong.
     
  10. IndoGhost

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    oohhh i like this
     
  11. Midknight

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    I got he made the name himself *shrug*

    I could buy the child criminal, for the simple fact that everyone in the wizard world seems to be totally stupid, so shifty individuals seem to be able to do what they want
     
  12. Dark Syaoran

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    He did choose it himself but it said something about it already meaning something big in Europe, so i dunno.
     
  13. Zevrillion

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    I think he got the name from a poster just after he ran away from the Dursleys.
     
  14. Silke

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    Ahh, that's what i meant.
     
  15. Contempt

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    meh. Its okay, at least. All I can really say is, meh.
     
  16. Anonymous

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    This is a quote from the Guiness World Book of records 2001 edition page 51 bottom right hand corner:

    Youngest Guerrilla Leaders:

    "God's Army," a renegae ethnic group from Burma (Myanmar) led by twelve year old twins Johnny and Luther Htoo. Who are said to possess mystical powers, took 700 people hostage for 24 hours at a hospital in Ratchburi. Thailand, on Jan. 24, 2000. The Guerrilla faction was formed when a splinter group left the Karen National Union (KNU) insurgent army.
     
  17. IndoGhost

    IndoGhost Dark Lord

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    wow. they must b good at what they do
     
  18. ChuckDaTruck

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    Prepubescent terrorists. Man, those kids are hardcore.
     
  19. True Story

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    That was me the guest.
     
  20. ChuckDaTruck

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