Discussion in 'Dark Arts' started by The-Hyphenated-One, Aug 7, 2007.
Updated yesterday, sorry for lateness, had some computer issues.
Well actually Voldemort said that the basilisk answers only to him and his blood line. Sorry not meant to be a flame but a simple correction
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This story has so much damn prose it makes it boring as hell. I mean its great to expand and all but you can overdo like some published fantasy novels.
...This post makes no sense. How does a story have too much prose? Do you even have any idea what prose is? Honestly...
I can only assume you meant either three things:
1) Too much dialogue between characters (which in itself makes no sense; character interaction is a key to any story, thus it's hard to have too much).
2) You misunderstand the term prose and actually meant the author was too verbose at times, which I almost understand.
3) It's almost too poetic. But if that's the case, I'm not sure how you relate that to other published fantasy.
Doesn't matter to me as I myself find this story very entertaining, it's a unique fic so even if it becomes long-winded at times, I still enjoy it.
EDIT: I can't spell.
Separate names with a comma.