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Abandoned Age of Deception by Takeda Lee - M

Discussion in 'Dark Arts' started by The-Hyphenated-One, Aug 7, 2007.

  1. Calz

    Calz Oh, I Got the Mic Now!

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    Updated yesterday, sorry for lateness, had some computer issues.
     
  2. Kang

    Kang Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    Well actually Voldemort said that the basilisk answers only to him and his blood line. Sorry not meant to be a flame but a simple correction:D
     
  3. Bane of Shinigami

    Bane of Shinigami Muggle

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    Spam Prose Spam

    This story has so much damn prose it makes it boring as hell. I mean its great to expand and all but you can overdo like some published fantasy novels.
     
  4. Solomon

    Solomon Heir

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    ...This post makes no sense. How does a story have too much prose? Do you even have any idea what prose is? Honestly...
     
  5. Joschneide

    Joschneide Groundskeeper

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    I can only assume you meant either three things:
    1) Too much dialogue between characters (which in itself makes no sense; character interaction is a key to any story, thus it's hard to have too much).
    2) You misunderstand the term prose and actually meant the author was too verbose at times, which I almost understand.
    3) It's almost too poetic. But if that's the case, I'm not sure how you relate that to other published fantasy.

    Doesn't matter to me as I myself find this story very entertaining, it's a unique fic so even if it becomes long-winded at times, I still enjoy it.

    EDIT: I can't spell.
     
    Last edited: Feb 3, 2008