Title: Akatsuki Babysitters Club
Author: Beetlebee
Rating: T
Genre: Humour/Crack
Status: Complete
Library Category: Naruto
Pairings: Obito/Kakashi
Summary: Kakashi decides to raise Naruto. The Akatsuki takes a new direction.
Link: https://archiveofourown.org/works/13933113

A cute, feel good fic that I found enjoyable, and that made me laugh in some places. It's not a huge epic, nor is it dark and edgy, but I think that this premise only works if it's kept short and sweet. There is some slash if you really dont like that, although it's never distasteful in its execution. I dont really have much more to say that isnt repeating myself in some way.

4/5.

 

While the writing itself seems competent, I don't find the dialogue engaging. And there is A LOT of it.
The characters are massively OC (fair given the fics status as crack), but it still seems like only a token effort was put into maintaining canon personalities (Tsunade Angry, Kakashi-Obito Rivalry, etc.).

The humor does not resonate with me at all which prevents me from enjoying the fic even a bit.

I mean.. It's the Akatsuki as babysitters.

2/5

 

Everything the guy above me said

Crack in general is a hard sell, and this isn't exactly a shining example of the sub-genre. I've seen worse, but I've seen better, too. This one doesn't really have anything going for it.

Another 2/5