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WIP Alexandra Quick and the Thorn Circle by Inverarity - K+

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by ray243, Jun 23, 2009.

  1. cucio

    cucio Groundskeeper

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    Inverarity is tying up loose ends left and right. I have to admit I'm curious about how this will shape book 7.
     
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    Lindsey Chief Warlock DLP Supporter

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    Inverarity has no issue killing their darlings. So many deaths recently.
     
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    Book 6 is now done.

    I enjoyed reading it, but it did feel like a bit too wild of a ride. There was too much going on, too little downtime, so many characters…

    The ending also came out of nowhere after a bit of an anticlimax.

    Great series, looking forward to the final book, but it feels like this could have been executed better.
     
  4. cucio

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    It's an entertaining read. Inverarity excels at creating an intricate, rich world and writes some thrilling action scenes. I found chapter 33 rather memorable.

    I can't gel with the characters, though. In my eyes most adults in the Quickverse behave like idiots and Alexandra is a particularly unlikable protagonist: too much chaos and willfulness for me to build any kind of rapport with her.

    Warts and all, I had a good time reading. I thank Inverarity for sharing his considerable talent and hard work and I'm here for book 7.