Title: Altered Destiny
Author: CandyAngell17
Rating: T
Genre: Action/Adventure/Romance
Pairing: Harry/Fleur
Status: WIP
Summary: Harry Potter is taken his first day at Privet Drive and is believed to be dead by the wizarding world.After 15 years of training with different creatures and clans he returns to continue his education at Hogwarts where a tournament is taking place.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2745016/1/

 

Aye i was reading this one, was gonna wait till he goes to hogwarts and see what the author does though, so far its prety good i must say, the latest chapter was kinda cool with the street fighting >_> but yea, thats my idea.....i need to go to sleep...

 

Well I highly doubt it will be friends with ron and hermione, twins I could see if they are still there. Street fighting scene was nice, just wondering who exactly he saved... or if that is unimportant.

 

Good story. Has a lot of potential, even with the timing all screwed up (the tournament is misplaced in 5th year). Also, those female twins are a bit overused and not as interesting as they were meant to be. But other than that, I liked it a lot.

 

I found this really good. I love non-human Harry - and vampires are cool, well, to me anyway.

 

This is 37k words of abandoned, unreadable fangirl crap.

Harry is taken by a clan of vampires and raised as their own, which gives the author an excuse to introduce a host of teenage OCs that belong in a Hannah Montana episode. There's Liam and Luke, Anastasia, Harry's 'uncle' Kylen Eagle, and countless others. And they all seem to have black panther or nundu animagus forms.

Excuse me while I vomit. There...that's better.

Here's part of the author's abandonment note:

On the list of things wrong with this story, the lack of conflict doesn't make the top ten.

0/5

 

Pretty much this ^. I really think it needs to get out of the library. Fast. 0/5