Title: Amenaza
Author: Alban55
Rating: M
Genre: Supernatural/Adventure
Status: WIP
Fandom: Naruto/Bleach
Pairings: No pairings.
Summary: After Naruto dies, he changes into a Hollow. This single death will change the lives and afterlives of many. And it's not exactly for the better.
Link: http://m.fanfiction.net/s/5864168/1

One of the better Naruto/Bleach crossovers.

 

I remember I read this story a long time ago, of what I remember it's a good fic, as far as bleach and naruto crossover go. I have a lot to reread, thanks for posting.

 

The first couple paragraphs are incoherent ramblings further mystified by shitty punctuation; and this is supposed to sell the fic. I shudder at the thought of what the rest is like.



Shit/5

 

At best this belongs in almost recommended. I've read it and do follow it, but it's not technically well written. It's certainly not of a high enough quality for the library.

I'd recommend this if you can look past the sometimes poor grammar and lacklustre punctuation, because there are some pretty cool moments scattered throughout the chapters. With the latest chapter, it looks like we're set for a significant divergence from the Bleach storyline, which I'm glad about.

In sum, if you're okay with an almost recommended quality story, this might work for you. Otherwise, forget about it.

 

Guilty pleasure.
As far as Naruto/Bleach stories, yes it is alright, good even. But its never going to be up to the standards that most people on here have. Its selling point is the fact that Naruto here is actually acting like a hollow and not a dead dude who's screwing every slightly freaky chick in the afterlife.

Weirdly enough the thing that annoys me the most are the parts with Minato and Kushina. Seeing as they both remember being alive, something I thought faded once you died, or you know you just don't remember in the first place. And the SS scenes all seem to cutsy almost considering the fact that Soul Society has problems that I can't imagine Minato being all that understanding about, but whatever.

In short Read it if you want to read about an actual, ruthless, hollow Naruto. Other than that you're better just avoiding the fandom entirely.

3/5 for being somewhat unique and not as shit as every other Naruto/Bleach cross.