I had wrote a story before, which sucked. It was my true first story, and although it was utter garbage, I wish I could bring it back. It started out with Harry being arrogant, completely cold to everyone, and ambitious. I had Moody shrunk down to Harry's age. I was making it up as I went, and soon it became out of hand. I think one of my first reviewers was a member of this forum... Dark-Syoaran or something like that. Can anyone give me some ideas for this? I might want to bring it back, it was my first.

 

Err; in order to fully be able to help you, we might need to read the story first.

 

Is this what you're talking about?

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2981096/1/

 

Was that the time travel story where Harry accidently goes back in time to when Moody was in school and is in Slytherin with him? And he's adopted by some auror (a Potter I think)?

 

Does the title 'Live and Learn' by Singe Of Hope strike you dark? I'll get to work on a rough draft. Oh, and Tonks was shrunk down. I think you made it to chapter 2 of mine Dark. And it started on the Hagrid scene, moving on to diagon alley, where he met Kid! Tonks and Draco.


Edit: Nah. It went like this: Hagrid comes, meets Dursleys and Harry at shack/house that was on that island. From there, I went into Diagon Alley, where Harry did some dull shopping and went into a robe shop. He met Tonks and Draco bladdy bladdy ba, then proceeded to finish shopping, yadda dadda, made Hagrid go away, went back to Dursleys, went to train, met kid Alastor and remeet with kid Tonks, got onto boats, sailed towards Hogwarts with his pet cat, met Female Blaise, sorting ceremony, then they got put in Slytherin, and then finally I ended the final chapter I had before deleting it with Harry going to sleep. In between, I put some horrible bullcrap about demons and angels in, thoroughly confusing everyone, and my constant references to video games not even out yet and shows. Whatever, I'm still working on the rough draft of the first chapter, and I will honestly tell you I won't have Demons and Angels showing up. I need to ask though, what are some of your opinions for good plot bunnies/devices?