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WIP Avengers of Steel by Reyel - T - Man of Steel/MCU

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Fatality, Apr 22, 2018.

  1. Fatality

    Fatality Order Member

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    Wow, 2 years since I posted this - didn’t realise it had been that long. For what it’s worth, I agree with a lot of the criticism the fic has gotten and I’d probably rate it closer to 2/5 at this point than the original 4/5 I gave it. I kind of cringe every time Xeon necros the post (doubly so because I linked another story of the authors in the OP and he seems to pick that up too, but I can’t edit it out).

    There are definitely still aspects of the story I enjoyed, probably the middle section with Asgard being a highlight, but yeah the shortcomings outweigh that by a lot. If you’re bored and want to read a super hero story, it’s serviceable.

    I also agree with what you’re saying Celestin, way too much crossover going on here. When
    Raven showed up in one of the later chapters it felt like a big jumping the shark moment.
     
  2. Celestin

    Celestin Dimensional Trunk

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    The moment when it started to bother me was when symbiotes were included in the Dark World's situation and it didn't really feel like there was a need for it.
     
  3. Xion

    Xion Robot Overlord Admin

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    Avengers of Steel has been updated with a new chapter.

    Story Stats
    Chapters: 42
    Words: 530,496
    Updated: 2021-07-28 05:18:32 UTC
    Published: 2017-04-25 18:28:13 UTC
    Previously updated: 3 months ago

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    Xion Robot Overlord Admin

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    Avenger Goddess has been updated with a new chapter.

    Story Stats
    Chapters: 31
    Words: 414,404
    Updated: 2021-11-07 23:44:50 UTC
    Published: 2017-07-04 05:22:19 UTC
    Previously updated: 8 months ago

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    Xion Robot Overlord Admin

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    Avenger Goddess has been updated with a new chapter.

    Story Stats
    Chapters: 32
    Words: 422,778
    Updated: 2021-11-18 01:26:50 UTC
    Published: 2017-07-04 05:22:19 UTC
    Previously updated: 10 days ago

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