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Azkaban

Discussion in 'Fanfic Discussion' started by Castiel, Feb 2, 2011.

  1. Castiel

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    Moody said in the fourth book that using any unforgivable is a one way ticket to Azkaban.

    As far as I have seen, that is the only point when we get to know what is the criteria for someone being imprisoned in Azkaban. What about thieves or robbers? Would they be subjected to the same treatment murderers get? Would they even be sent to Azkaban or are there some small level wizarding prisons?

    Does Azkaban have different levels of security? Perhaps one where dementors aren't even roaming. Someone, if steals something out of need, doesn't really deserve to be subjected to the horrors of dementors.

    Basically I am planning to probably go for a fic where I would need to show Azkaban more than Hogwarts. And I need to make sure how I portray it as realistic. I never expected Azkaban to be one big building with no windows closed from all sides (as shown in OotP).

    How did you think Azkaban would be like when you first heard about it? What are the measures preventing it from being breached?

    PS: Thoughts on the thing in the bold above?
     
  2. coleam

    coleam Death Eater

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    I always saw it as one big building with no windows, exactly like it was shown in OotP. Basically, an old sealed up castle converted into a prison. Would have to have the dementors of course, guards to control the dementors and take care of feeding and such. Anti-apparation wards (and anti-any other sort of travel wards). Muggle repelling charms, maybe a large-scale illusion as well to hide it from wizards? Unplottable. You can get creative with wards if you want; I basically think of it as having every possible protection the Ministry can think of.

    If you want to get into the personnel a bit more, the guards probably hate it there - it's a shithole and they're constantly around dementors and insane inmates. It's one of the lowest paid, shittiest jobs in the wizarding world - not some elite auror post. The aurors might be on call in order to help in a prison break, but I don't think any would actually be stationed on the island.

    And no, there are no "minimum security" prisons. There is Azkaban. That is all. You rob someone, you go to Azkaban. You kill someone, you go to Azkaban. You get any sort of prison time, it's in Azkaban. Pretty effective crime deterrent imo. There are no levels of Azkaban with no dementors either. The only difference between inmate treatment is the duration of their incarceration.
     
  3. Sesc

    Sesc Slytherin at Heart Moderator

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    What we know: It's on an island, it's in the North Sea, you can only fly there, it's got Dementors, it's got cells with door with bars, and it's got a cemetery. There might be more, but that's all I remember.

    And yeah, it's got all kinds of prisoners. Hagrid got sent there because they thought he had a monster that petrified students, Marvolo Gaunt was sent there for six months for attacking a Ministry official, Stan Shunpike was sent without any reason at all. Basically, there's one wizarding prison, and that's Azkaban. Your crime determines the length of your stay, not the place.

    Also: This page is your friend.


    Edit:
    Don't forget that not all crimes have to result in a prison sentence. For stealing something, a fine could work; although, given what we have seen in Canon, I wouldn't be at all surprised if they threw you into Azkaban if you couldn't pay it -- meaning, apart from high-profile prisoners (the Death-Eaters), it's the weakest and poorest that make up the majority of the inmates.
     
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  4. The Berkeley Hunt

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    As to the structure of Azkaban, there have been a ton of fics with unique buildings. Renegade Cause has Azkaban drawing its power from a 'spire' which is strange and magical in and of itself. I've also seen it as group of broken down old buildings with the only real defense being bars and dementors.

    Really, in your own fanfiction, make Azkaban however you want it to be. Just don't include a lordship of the island. Ever.
     
  5. Blaise

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    Coleam hit the nail on the head. I think the fact that there's no low-level incarceration system adds to the overall terror of the place. A few seconds in the presence of one was enough to make Harry pass out; a whole day surrounded by numerous dementors is probably horrible, much less any extended sentence.

    Keep in mind that the only defenses against a dementor are focusing on one's innocence and being an animagus. I don't like the idea that an occlumens can simply block off their effects by putting up teh barrierz, whether guilty or not. Just like there's a difference between a cutting curse and Sectumsempra, establish a difference between Legilimency and the dementor effect. It'll give you more to write about, compared to a character who's built up a tolerance to the dementors.
     
  6. ashura

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    When I first read about Azkaban, I imagined the levels of security being organized by floor and density of Dementors. ie. upper levels have fewest Dementors and the lower you go, the more Dementors there are resulting in a heavier atmosphere of misery. But that was with my original vision of Azkaban as some sort of underground bunker with only the top level visible on the island. It doesn't really mesh well with the tall tower on an island concept.
     
  7. The Berkeley Hunt

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    Either way the actual structure is built, I think the main point of Azkaban is that both the 'punishment' and 'incarceration' aspects are almost completely taken by dementors. Its not the bars or the building or the wards or the wizards, its the soul sucking beasts who are the main point of the place.

    You can add extra things, like an auror outpost or magical objects etc, but the main focus of any expedition to Azkaban should always be dememtors.
     
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    Interesting thing to note, canon puts Azkaban just off the cost of Holland.
     
  9. Sesc

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    Wut? It doesn't >_>

    It's supposedly somewhere in the rough middle of the triangle England - Denmark - Norway:

    [​IMG]

    Green: ~60 km off the shore.


    If you're talking about the problem that Sirius went to Surrey first, before he went to Hogwarts, after breaking out, Rowling said something regarding that in an interview:

    Is the island that Azkaban is on located at the southern end of the U.K. since Black had to pass the Dursley's place on his way to Hogwarts?

    A. No, he didn't have to pass the Dursley's place. He just wanted to.

    Source.

    So it remains in the "middle of the North Sea" like Fudge said in HBP; in the above interview Rowling actually says "In the north of the North Sea." Of course the problem still is that Sirius swam to the shore, and as I indicated in the map, it's 700 km from Edinburgh to Bergen. I've got no idea how far a dog can swim, but it's not 350 km. So that seems a bit contradictory -- is it in the green area, after all, close to the coast, and Fudge was exaggerating in front of the PM?


    Personally, I've put Azkaban off of Newcastle, but that had no reason in particular.
     
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    Meaning it's only a prelude to what lies beyond?
     
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    I was unaware this had been subject to the 'word of god' treatment. The actual quote from the PoA is worded in a such a way that Azkaban is logically between Benelux and the UK.
     
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    I always used the film's depiction (three point tower with a hollow center).

    The Dementors would live in the lowest level and the bottom of the center pit, with maximum security prisoners on level two, life sentence prisoners on level three, etc. up until the top floor where the Auror's would have they're living quarters (as far from Dementors as possible) and the only quick entrance/exit to the prison (either Floo or Vanishing Cabinet) that lead to the DMLE at the Ministry.
     
  13. Sesc

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    Yeah, I know, and it conflicted with it being "north" and "in the middle of the north sea", so people asked that Rowling that question. Usually, I'm not all that much a fan of the Word of God, but in this case, I believe she meant to have Azkaban where she said it was all along, and simply worded it badly in PoA. That's why I thought this is acceptable: it's not so much Rowling ret-conning stuff out of the books, but a clarification.


    Regarding Sirius, something I just thought of:

    The north sea has a pretty strong tide on the English coast. So that could have been a help, assuming he jumped into the water when the tide was just rising; i.e. it might have been possible that he only needed to stay afloat at times, and was still drifting towards the coast.
     
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  14. Grinning Lizard

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    Er -

    Are these both canon? They're contradictory. I can't imagine a prison would have more protections going into it than away from it. It was given than Sirius swam, iirc, so where does the flying thing come from?
     
  15. Aekiel

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    What possible reason could they have for putting protections on the inside? Sirius is supposedly the only person to have gone to Azkaban for a long period and remained sane, never mind break out of the place. Besides that, if anyone bar an animagus tried to escape they'd have to deal with the massive number of Dementors first.
     
  16. Sesc

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    Hm. Fudge says during his meeting with the PM:

    "...I've just come from Azkaban," Fudge had panted, tipping a large amount of water out of the rim of his bowler hat into his pocket. "Middle of the North Sea, you know, nasty flight... the dementors are in uproar"--he shuddered [...]

    I'm not sure if there was more source -- I thought there was, but I can't find it right now, anyway -- but even so the question remains, why on earth Fudge would fly there, if he simply could Floo/Apparate/Portkey.

    I've interpreted it that way that whatever protects Azkaban isn't (can't be made to) working only in one direction; meaning, what prevents you from simply Apparating off the island (for which you don't need a wand, remember) also prevents Apparating to Azkaban. And the same with the other means of magical transportation.

    So what remains is actually travelling there, and that means the fastest way is obviously a broom/flying (as compared with a boat, for example -- even though that's seems the only reasonable way to get prisoners there), which was what Fudge said he did. That, at least, makes sense.


    So yes, the way I see it, both are Canon. Where specifically did you see the contradiction? Or did you mean swimming vs. middle of North Sea?
     
  17. Blazzano

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    Well, figure that we're talking about a human shaped like a dog, not an actual dog. Sirius might have used some human intelligence to assist the effort, like finding some bit of floating debris that could serve as a makeshift raft.

    Or you could invent even more elaborate escape techniques - might Sirius have found a wand on his way out of Azkaban? Alternately, maybe he swam to a merchant ship (bound for England) and found a way to get aboard.
     
  18. Grinning Lizard

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    Ah - no, the phrasing of 'only' flying. The middle of the north sea / swimming arguments could have nothing but conjecture, but I wondered if it explicitly stated somewhere you could only fly and how that tied in to Sirius' escape in JKR's head. My canon-fu has been better. It does make sense, I just wasn't looking at the most obvious conclusion.

    An argument that can be applied to putting further protections on it at all. Why would you break into the prison if it's inhabitants are all insane? From what we see, Voldemort is the only person who ever succeeds and perhaps the only person who even tries. Azkaban is a place that people do not want to go to. You put protections on the inside, though, because it's a prison - not everyone in the wizarding world is as daft as Fudge and presumably in the creation of this 'hell on earth' someone decided that failsafes (such as putting it in the North Sea, putting bars on the cells, restricting magical access, etc) might be a good idea, Dementors or no.

    But as to making it easier to enter rather than leave, it isn't even a case of 'protections' on the interior, it's a case of safety and conveniance: restricting escape routes is common sense, yeah, but considering that Azkaban is for the most part a one-way-trip, why not make it easier to transport prisoners there? Flying in formation without the use of an Imperius sounds a little risky if you're dealing with the most dangerous people in the magical world, surrounded by guards holding wands. A single, well-organised one-way portkey would kill a hundred miles worth of potential escape attempts. Easier in, harder out.

    (@Sesc: and Fudge would fly there because he couldn't travel away from it if he went magically, I suppose)
     
  19. Sesc

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    Ah yeah, I worded that poorly. It wasn't supposed to mean "only flying", but rather, only physically moving there, either flying or travelling by boat. Flying is just the most obvious way, if you don't have any prisoners, at least.

    As for why they don't take Portkeys, the explanation that really does make the most sense is that you can't have it simply in one direction. You can't Portkey out, so you can't Portkey in. I think they simply blanket banned magical means of travelling at Azkaban.

    However, I don't think that's that much of a problem: if they do take a boat for prisoners to get there, you only need to stun the convict before the trip, and wake him up when he's safely in the cell. That's no real hassle.


    @blazzano:
    Sure, you could do all that. However, assuming Sirius means he swam to the shore when he said he swam to the shore, that rules out hitching a ride on a boat. And with some piece of debris you can stay afloat, right, however, depending on how far north you are, the North Sea has only about 14 to 17 degree Celsius, even in July. I was actually assuming that as a dog Sirius could swim/float further than any human could, but even so

    350 km away from the coast,
    nearing the coast with an average of 1 km/h,

    = 350 hours = 14.5 days on cold sea. That just isn't working.



    Edit:
    Reading my quote again, I really do start to think Fudge was exaggerating. Seems completely in character, especially in that scene. I wouldn't put Azkaban further than 100 km off the coast. That's far enough to be near impossible for humans to cross anyway, and maybe just close enough to offer a dog with fur to keep it warm a better chance. 100 km means 4 days at sea -- much longer, and he's dying of thirst.
     
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  20. Blazzano

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    I've tried to find some stories on the internet about dogs swimming to shore after falling off boats, and there aren't too many. I found a reference to one Australian dog who fell overboard and had to swim five miles to an island.

    So yeah, it does look Sirius would be fucked without some major degree of help, or without Azkaban being very close to shore, even if we assume that he could go much longer than five miles. Even at 100km, I think the dog would have needed to find something on which he could heave most of his bodyweight out of the water.

    Incidentally there's one endurance swimmer (Martin Strel) who managed to swim 313 mi / 505 km over 84 hours "nonstop," but that's obviously an extreme case. Plus the dude's swim was undoubtedly current-assisted, because he was swimming down the Danube.
     
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