I especially liked this unknown side-effect of being master of death. It also guarantees that Sirius will have dead-future-Sirius memories as well.

This is the first story that's had me really psyched in a while. 4/5

 

If Harry brought back some of Lupin's awareness with him, will this also apply to his enemies?

Hrm. I'm generally not a fan of time travel fics where Voldemort also benefits from the travel.

 

I'm thinking it only applies to those he summoned with the Stone. And Voldemort won't get the awareness, since the part of him that was linked to Harry (horcrux) was gone.

 

Yeah, Blaise, that's what I was considering when I started using that premise as my personal justification. Remus and Sirius both being dead and called by Harry as an escort to Voldemort is the reason I envision them gaining an 'awareness' of the future.

Of course, this is my personal mental picture, and there's no telling if the author actually is using that or not, but in my mind, it fits.

 

Updated.

Pretty interesting chapter but more transition/filler than anything of substance.

 

This has been updated.

 

Holy crap, I'd just about completely forgotten this one.

 

This, basically.

Short chapter, but I can't wait to see what sort of far-reaching consequences there are due to the really huge change in the timeline.

 

Things finally starting to happen?

 

Yes, although we won't see the consequences until the next chapter at least.

I think it a bit off that Dumbledore dismissed Lupin and Harry tring to tell him stuff they thought was important. Certainly after hearing them out he might not act on what they're saying in the way they want him to, but it's unusual for him to not even listen in the first place.

 

It's been updated again tonight. The new chapter is only on livejournal right now, but I expect it'll be crossposted soon enough.

Chapter 14 Linky

 

Not bad. The new chapters (13 & 14) felt like they were really two halves of one whole; two pretty short chapters that carry the same tone and work to advance the plot for later chapters, but don't do much else. Time to wait and see, again, I suppose.

Also, concerning Harry's thoughts on Remus' & Sirius' memories and the state of his parents' spirits, I just have to say... Called it!

 

My understanding is that the people Harry called with the deathly hallow ring before he went to his death are the people which get the dreams now. Which would explain Remus and Sirius.

 

The new chapter is more to my liking. More consequences and some original ideas regarding Pettigrew and Occlumency.

Hovering around a 4, with the potential for a 5 if there are more updates and a bit more action and plot.

 

I'm having trouble believing that Harry is even considering sharing information with two 11-year olds, regardless of occlumency. Also, I agree with cheddar - the dreams really seem unnecessary, unless the author wants to force Harry to work with the consequences of them, for some reason.

 

I am either having a very vivid hallucination, or the story was just updated today:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3693052/16/Back_Again_Harry

I don't even remember what happened last; I'll have to read it again from the beginning to refresh my memory.

I had already given up on it as abandoned. I hope the author starts updating more often.

 

I don't think I've ever seen prophetic dreams as a reason why the storyline diverged ever before, so it was new to me. I haven't read the story yet, but it sounds more interesting and magical than "domino effect".

 

Eh, I can't stand the H/G in this. The writing is fairly sound, but not incredible. Honestly I'd give it a 3.5 right now.

Nothing I can say hasn't been said already.

Not worthy of a place in the library.