Title: Back to the Future
Author: Narcissa1
Rating: T
Genre: Action/Adventure/General
Pairing: H/Bellatrix
Status: Work in Progress
Summary: He has the power to change the past, the knowledge to change the future, the time to save the present but does he also have the heart to change everything he has ever known, to risk too push the world into a chaos greater then the dark ages before Camelot

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1965345/1/


it is a great story imo. it has not been updated for a long time but it is updated today. i think the author decided to continue the story.

 

Big fan of this story. It's one of the good Harry/Bella fics out there. Haven't read the new chapter yet.

 

One of the better Bella/harry stories I have read, wil lbe intresting to see how the world will look without Bella as a Death Eater...

 

Great story.. been following it since Chapter one. Favorite Hellatrix around.

 

my favourite too

 

Just started to read it after ulkser's post. I keep hearing the intro to Terminator 2 in my head after Harry told Bella he is from the future. Great story nonetheless.

 

Very good story. There were a few grammatical errors that got to me, but the overall writing was well done. I really liked the way they made Harry out to be a pureblood, and how Bellatrix wasn't made out of character. Great story!

 

Harrys love for bella just came outta nowhere, it's like he takes two looks at her and all of sudden he's admitting to anyone who'll listen he loves. Not to mention the fact that she's only 13 and he's 18. Other than that, it's well written and interesting.

 

Love at First Sight I'll say.

 

Isn't she 14? That's why the Blacks sent the proposal

 

i like the story, but agree...the harry/bella seemed a bit rushed. we had one scene of them talking, then the next thing you know he's angsting over having fallen in love with her.

i would have rather had the angle that harry wanted to grudge fuck the young hottie to take out some manner of vengeance on the sins of the older bella...but then eventually stop using her and instead fall for her.

and i think the author misused spellcheck on the word 'taught'.

 

I'll probably read it when I get home, but honestly, couldn't the author come up with an original title and not steal from a movie?

 

I like the story the only thing that bothers me is the Writing Style its all cramped up i can barely read it but thats just me

 

Call me a perfectionist if you must, but the grammar in this fic really annoys me. I couldn't read any of the dialogue without literally cringing.
I give this fic a 5/10 at best.

 

I liked this, seemed to be pretty well done and the fact he is there for 7 years instead of just one seems like a good way to build up the relationships between him and his parents. Looking forward to more.

 

One of the better time travel stories. But can be confusing.

 

This is agreatstory andthe gramatical errors and typos come from the fact that the author is German I was a formerbeta for her but when she disappeared for a while I lost contact and haven't heard from her since.

hope to have more on this story especially since it is not only an enjoyable H/Bella it also fullfills super Harry Time travel and political Harry as well.

gallandro

 

Great story.
im sure i have read it before.
lol

 

I liked the story. At times a bit confusing, but not too bad.

 

I finally read this story and found it lacking. Plot is stupid and confusing and Harry is acting like a bitch at times.