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Bad Lines

Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by deathtehfluffybunny, Dec 11, 2006.

  1. deathtehfluffybunny

    deathtehfluffybunny Fourth Year

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    Great story or not so great story. Just any specific line that makes you titter and roll on the ground with laughter by itself.

    This is from a great story.

    Nothing against the writer, but that line makes me think of the Tom Sawyer fence scene or the Malfoy's as some type of noble construction company.
     
  2. Shezza

    Shezza Renegade 4 Life DLP Supporter

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    Harry's parent's never died. In stead, he was neglected because of his twin brother thought to be the BoyWhoLived. Far away, Peter Pan senses a child growing up to fast. Harry grows up in Neverland has friends, and fights pirates, but what happens when he

    ....When I saw this, I almost died in laughter. My breathing was coming out in small little gasps and frankly, I sounded like my cat when she is choking on something. Just...Peter Pan and Neverland...fighting pirates? Fucking hell....
     
  3. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    Harry Potter and the Dragon's Breath by Omniscientearl

    Hmm, so the more people know about a secret, easier will it be to keep it hidden. Does this make any sense to you?
     
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