Hey guys, I'm currently in the process of my English Major in my yr 12 year and I've finished the story at 6000 words, due to the requirement being 6000-8000

So whilst I can't post it I was wondering If I could have someone take a look, just so I can get a gauge on what they actually think? Like teachers and stuff only go so far, would anyone be interested?

What it is primarily about is undertones such as how everything in the world is beginning to have a price, as in we don't think should I do this, but more Can I afford this? Then morality, good and evil etc; deliberately vague so markers don't google this shit online

 

It's more like when it is send it away to get marked there's a risk if it does pop up, they may think I've simply copy/pasted someone elses work then I have to prove I am the owner of my account etc; And could be accused of plagiarism etc;

Just being very cautious haha

 

Heh, he's got a good point there. They would definitely see it on google.

 

Well, I just gave it a brief test and it doesn't seem like they pop-up so I might just throw it on and see what happens. Knowing my luck though it'll be the one thing that does, thanks guys

 

Really? I sometimes google to find threads on dlp. Figured it'd be the same for the WBA.

 

Yeah just copy pasting posts from Real Life discussion comes up, pasting two paragraphs of a story doesn't direct you through WBA.

 

WbA is currently visible only for logged in.

For example googling "The walk from Southwark Orphanage to King's Cross Station was long, but without incident." will not reveal this post: https://forums.darklordpotter.net/showpost.php?p=654600&postcount=54 (only fanfiction.net)