The latest chapter could have been better, if he absolutly needs the information that Narcissa has so should he have kept Draco as a hostage instead and blackmail her...

 

read this story for a while apart from the plot line's which have been used thousands of times it's a good read iam just waiting to see what happens if/when he goes back to school

 

I too will be happy if this author does at least a bit of Hogwarts since most fics just abandoned with the end of summer

 

New update.

I must say, his description of the Mind Arts was quite interesting.

It was a fairly good chapter.

 

I like the story so far. I just hope he doesnt collect all his little schoolbuddies and a kind of summer-DA in Knockturne with this time magic stuff. I hope to see different characters and age groups and I hope he wont go to Hogwarts. I like the idea of not openly opposing anyone but letting them go missing mysteriously. Please, no Black Army on the battlegrounds in the setting sunday.

 

updated it all went to hell its turned into super harry,draco,neville and vampire luna with dueling dummies and cliches abound I will no longer read this. BAH!!!!

 

Feh.. I think its rather good. Vampire Luna was a bit surprising though.

 

I stopped seriously reading it around Chapter 10 when it hit my critical cliche mass threshold (CCMT).

 

I liked it better at the beginning, but it's still good. I just hope there won't be more clichés.

 

I don't know how many of you have actually read Power of Time, but there was a chapter somewhere towards the end where the last line of the chapter has Neville and Harry kiss and then he comes in the next chapter and basically said he threw that in there, it didn't really happen and he was just sort in a weird mood and felt like screwing with everyone. The second I read the last line of this new chapter, I felt like that all over again. I'm pretty sure in this case it's serious and Luna really is the Vampire princess, but I really want the author to turn around in the next chapter with a "Gotcha! Just kidding."

 

This is a good fic and I can not find anythingto my dislikeing but once again I have no eye for quality. After reading this fic it has given me some ideas on a fic I'm writeing and was hoping someone could point me out to a good independant harry fic so I can expand my creativity and create a plot that I hpoe will be to everyones' likeing. Possibly a fic where Harry makes Dumbledore fall to knees and cry for his manipulations like in the fic 'Traitors Within'.

 

You might want to check out one of the numerous challenges if your looking for some inspiration. There, Now I have done my one good deed of the month...being nice sucks.

As for this fic, the beginning was exciting and new. Then it got steadily worse untill I just stopped caring about it. I do read it but I would rather see an update from TokehGecko than this. It was a good fic, now it's just...bleh

 

I guess I'm a blind, dumb, idiot than. I was only doing the suck up rotuine. And I guess takeing ideas and breaking them apart and putting them back together differently is stealing other peoples' idea.....I guess.

 

You try that and you get banned. Then you get all of DLP on your ass. Trust me that happened before.

 

Then I guess I better stop before I get ass raped(again). Well I just have a question, how do I post my story on this site?

 

/Me whacks 'Follow The Reaper' upside the head.

When on the page, forums.darklordpotter.net you should find at the bottom of the page a folder called 'work by auther'. Please click to open this folder and then create a new Thread. Insert the name of your story in the subject line. And then insert your story in the filler area.

 

AHHHHHHHHHHHH! My fic got deleted what the fuck happened! Now I have to start all over again! /commits hara kiri.

 

Never heard of saving your progress?

This story is retarded, I skimmed a few chapters and as soon as I saw the fourth one (trunk, grims and a katana) I jumped off, 'cause this ride is on a one way trip into the author's private lala-land.

I just can't take stories that use Japanese crap anymore.