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Blackened Sunrise by The Itch - M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by ip82, Nov 21, 2005.

  1. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    Title: Blackened Sunrise
    Author: The Itch
    Rating: M (R)
    Pairings: None
    Status: COMPLETED... sort of
    Summary - Having vanished at the end of 4th year, Harry Potter is forced to return during 6th and he's changed. Big Time. [dark, ch67 revised, complete]
    Link - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1020928/1/

    It's dark, crazy, animalistic/demon Harry. His followers, whom he with time corrupts, are Ginny, Malfoy and Sirius (this is post-GOF). The rest of the characters are canon-like, which won't exactly save them in the end...

    Sigh. I really don't know what to make of this story. Or how to decribe it exactly. This guy has created system of magic and overall atmosphere unlike anything I've seen before. Which don't necceserily means it's good.

    If you decide to try reading this, I should warn you that from chapters 40-45 this story is going steadily down the hill. This guy had obviously "pulled Shezza" on his readers and tried to keep writing beyond the logical and preplanned ending, tangling himself up in meaningless subplots and filler material. The ending is particilary bad, but you'll probably drop this long before you reach it.
     
  2. Necrule Paen

    Necrule Paen DLP Elite DLP Supporter

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    I used to read this a few years ago. He is one of the people that made magical shackles a cliche. I kind of enjoyed it then, but I wouldn't now.
     
  3. Lord Osiris

    Lord Osiris Auror

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    Tis an oldie all right, probably one of the first fics i read! can't say i really liked it though and thats back then. think i might give it squize again, things might of changed?
     
  4. Mrriddler

    Mrriddler High Inquisitor

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    Yeah, really really old and a pretty sick piece if I recall. It's the one where Harry is a weapon and massacres everyone right? Could have been done better I think, but was interesting at the time, hehe, kind of like Harry's madness in a way.
     
  5. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran No. 4 Admin

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    I liked it when I started reading it ages ago but then I think gun's were brought into it. I really dont like guns being used in Harry Potter unless he is on the run in the muggle world and cant use magic or he'll be caught. Even then though he doesnt have some super-uber pistol, just a shitty glock is good enough for that.
     
  6. Piccaboo!

    Piccaboo! Second Year

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    Yeah a real oldie this one. I too read it like a year ago and i found it really interesting then, but not something i would reread - not that I ever reread anything mind you. I did like weapon though, intrigured me a lot :)
     
  7. DarthBill

    DarthBill The Chosen One DLP Supporter

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    This was interesting enough at first, until the author lost interest. Also, it has been remade, but the remake is only like two chapters long and seems to be abandoned.
     
  8. DarkAizen

    DarkAizen Professor DLP Supporter

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    EDITED:
    I started to read it. I got bored after a few chapters.
    It's not the typical dark!Harry that I like.

    I'm also about to get a PM from a moderator because I don't understand the difference between a post on a forum and text messaging my friends.
     
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