Yes I know im insane.

Your supposed to say I -_-!!!!

 

Good job, BloodLust. Since this is an Independent!Harry, I've taken the liberty to put it in the DarkLordPotter Library: Independent C2. Good job.

 

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Library time for this fic! Great job BloodLust, this was a great chapter. It really showed a different side of Harry that we aren't used to seeing, which is great. Like Yarrgh, I'd like to see more of Tracey Davis, but maybe more as an acquaintance rather than a love interest. It might start to get a little tedious just hearing about Harry all of the time, instead of some interaction between a couple of friends or so. Good work, keep it up, and update soon.

 

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THANK YOU!!!
Someone said it.

 

The Hagrid scene was very interesting, as was the rest of the two chapters, but the scene with Cho was way too fast. There was no buildup. Other than that, everything seemed like it fit together very well, and I liked that Harry still cared for half of the Weasleys, but wasn't beating himself up over Arthur's death. Good job on finding the middle-ground there. Everything else seemed pretty good, both chapters were interesting to read, so keep it up and update soon.

 

It's a good story... but my only nerf is the fast pace and the 1 minute reading time chapters.

Sometimes your characters tend to slip or do things for no reason.. thats probably from writing a very very undetailed fic.

I'll give it 3.5 out of 5 stars. Fairly good plot.. of what plot there is. Also a good power level on Harry. None of that super crap or becoming a dueling god in a summer.

 

I was wondering why you stopped but I can completely understand why. The whore got slapped. Free Drinks for everyone. The Whore Jr. got slapped. Another Round!!

 

Thank god harry found out the prophecy before the DOM thing..

 

I like the story. I really loved the part were Harry slapped Ginny.

 

"ding-dong the witch got slapped,
potter reeled back and knocked the second bitch dead!"

ahh wishful thinking...

I loved this chapter...still seems a bit short though. I guess now that Harry knows about the prophecy and at the very least can keep Voldemort's visions at bay Sirius won't have to die *knocks on wood three times and chants in tongues*.

If you really feel that you have to kill him off...atleast let the old dog have a little fun before he has to go...you know..."fun" as in the "do-it-yourself-harem" variety.

</my two cents>

 

I didnt really thin Sirius would act like that being from the Black Family. Other than that nice that its been updated.
I like the new chapter.

 

good chap, short good none the less. i like how ur doing sirius, i think it would b fairly realistic thinking of harry as his father.

 

Not much to say. Good chapter

 

Nothing to comment on. It was written well, and I enjoyed the dynamics between the three of them. I look forward to the Knockturn scene, so keep it up and update soon!

 

I can only emphasise how sorry I am that this update has taken aaaages to appear, my IB, has, unfortunately been slightly more difficult and time consuming than I had originally anticipated. What with school, about 20 hours of homework a week, 12 hours of paid work, and then CAS activities on top of that, and Lauren is left with absolutely NO free time. However, this half term I am sat at my computer staring at a history essay about Metternich, and I cannot. be. arsed. So I'm bringing you another slice of action in about half an hour it should be up, enjoy.

 

I think its not your best work. I can understand about things in rl getting in the way. I mean hell its not like your getting paid to do this.

 

what's up? you post almost daily for like a month now it stops? No rush rather see something real good than some shit but when can we expect an update?

 

Sorry, again as i posted above, i have just updated and my real life has just been getting a liiiittle on top of me lately.

 

oh sorry, don't really worry about it, just liked you story thats all. I really should've read more of the posts but didn't really have the time.

 

Next chapter up, and oh the suspense is killing me, even if I do know exactly what's going to happen...