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Dead Link Blood Red by SongOfTheSky (me) - M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by BloodLust, Aug 3, 2006.

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  1. Ragon

    Ragon Dark Lord

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    I sorta liked it. IT SUCKED. But update and I might like it.

    3.9/5 UPDATE SOON!

    I didnt really think it sucked
     
  2. sirius009

    sirius009 Minister of Magic

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    I like the new chapter, however, it is interesting to see that Mulo knows a cure for that one curse but Snape doesn't. Unless.... Harry becomes a vampire.
     
  3. BloodLust

    BloodLust Banned

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    So I updated because Missy, quite frankly scares me :p So y'all got her to thank.
     
  4. Ragon

    Ragon Dark Lord

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    Okay I didnt like it as well as some. UPDATE!!! It just wasnt my favorite chapter. But Beggers cant be choosers. Now tell me what Harry becomes? Half vampire deatheater ass kicking wizard? But blood from nose and ears isnt too good usually.
     
  5. BloodLust

    BloodLust Banned

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    Update, bit of crazy Harry in this one, but all's well that end well
     
  6. deathinapinkboa

    deathinapinkboa Minister of Magic

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    I'm not overly in love with it. I dropped it around the X-mas chapter. Harry is just to vexing for my tastes. He acts childish and violent. I've also always had a soft spot in my heart for Molly Weasley, despite the fact that she's and over bearing bitch, or perhaps because of it. Thus I don't really like the idea of her suffering torment like the loss of her husband.

    Harry's interactions with Umbridge did not run true with me: the situation in which she placed him and the entrance of Malo really didn't work for me.

    I'd give it a 2 out of 5 stars
     
  7. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    Announcing the posting of a new, if regrettably short chapter, as of a day ago.
     
  8. Iztiak

    Iztiak Prisoner DLP Supporter

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    Very good, though I'm not too fond of the "Harry becomes a vampire" storys, this one is rather good so far. Good job, I give it 4/5
     
  9. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    I give it a 5/5 simply because Harry becomes a vampire and there isn't any slash, and is supplemented by good writing. The only other such fic I read was Lords of the Night.
     
  10. Vlad the Impaler

    Vlad the Impaler Muggle

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    that was a sick story man write so more
     
  11. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    It's been stuck at 666 reviews for, what, about a month now?
     
  12. Othalan

    Othalan Headmaster DLP Supporter

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    It's alright. Interesting plot and all that, but there's one glaring problem that just bugged the hell out of me: Its way too rushed. In the space of, what, three or four paragraphs, Harry makes, and follows through with, a completely life-changing decision? There's really not much of a lead-up at all, and that just doesn't work for me. I dunno why; I guess I'm just picky like that.

    I give it a 2.8/5.
     
  13. Seratin

    Seratin Proudmander –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    i liked it, im not too keen on the whole vampire harry thing though....i would like to see him getting to know some of the slytherins and more time with the dsg, 3.5/5
     
  14. Zeal Apathy

    Zeal Apathy Squib

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    I couldn't get past the first page.
    Too short, and hurried for my liking.
     
  15. Renzhoulawyers

    Renzhoulawyers Sent Back to India

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    uhh, story got pulled? Backups anyone?
     
  16. Iztiak

    Iztiak Prisoner DLP Supporter

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    Blast it, I hate it when they do that...

    Do you know if she removed it entirely, or if she's rewriting it, or if it's just being posted somewhere else?
     
  17. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    Damnshitthefuckingshitthefuck. -_-

    First thing I'd do is check the archives. Barring that I remember it being in the Work By Author.

    But man, lately less fics are getting pulled by FFnet than by their authors.
     
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  18. mbond98

    mbond98 Seventh Year

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    It wasn't all that good, anyway, but still worth saving.

    Email the author.
     
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