Great story

 

Great story Vash

 

Ok, I'm probably going to sound a bit disturbed now.
I really enjoyed what I've read so far and probably need some therapy, but even the smut was compelling.

I really felt drawn in and almost cried when the chapters ran out.

Bloody hell you're a exceptional writer.
You should have a bloody league of your own, decent length chapter's and not overly repetitive. It's the first time I've enjoyed a smut fic.

Have you ever considered working in the porn industry.

On a side note I really hate Herman so I hope for some torture at least.
I also like how you've utilised some of the more unknown characters, it's also very believable.
The slow descent into darkness is progressing with excellent timing, I just stand in awe.

Thanks for sharing you're greatness, and thanks Silent for ensuring we are not grammatically tortured.

I'd also like to say that whatever path you lead us down will be a interesting experience.

Again Great story,
Litha

 

Nahhh Vash wouldn't make it in the Porn insdustry. His storys have a good solid plot...

 

I dont know how you write smut section like you do but there quite good hey. I'm begining to enjoy this fic far more then any of your others that you've written, the way you destroyed Greengrass was spectacular, fucking her up mind and body truely inspiring.

When shell we expect an update for it? im extreamly curious to find out where your going with Harry's little episodes of switching to a different persona as well.

 

IM quite flattered you think these things. THe smut will run out soon though and Ill have these demons lusting for my head. But the plot shall remain in its place.

I DO have a plot for this, surprisingly. And no, I've never thought of working for the porn industry. Though I think i should. Might improve the quality.

I seriously dont think im as good as your making me out to be, but my ego thanks you none the less.

Herman will get hers though. Vereh Vereh soon. *cackles*

Thanks Ossy. I enjoy this fic. Nearly as much as Lily White, though it might not seem it since I seem to be stuck in Lily.

Personally, Oedipus is my favorite story thus far.

As far as an update goes. Silent is on vacation I believe, and she has chapter 4. Ill post an unbeta'd version now, and post the Beta'd version later.

 

¤ DLP ¤ Fanfiction ¤ Ficwad ¤

Unbeta'd. Chapter four is here. ENJOY. AND REVIEW YOU WHORES!

 

And you need a beta why?

Very nice, can't wait for more.

 

Ignoring the (substantial amount of) mistakes as it's un beta'd [yes, I can't be wholly positive, I tried...I just couldn't do it], it's quite good. I can see hints of a plot now from the first half of that chapter. Threesome was great and it's nice to see the 'Puffs being kinky. By the way, don't you think you'll run out of girls for Harry to fuck in time?

Special Edit: It was the bestest thing eva! Lyk plzz updte NOW!!!111!!1

 

Liked the new chapter, coming together quite nicely and the updates are coming quickley enough that i dont loose interest or forget about it which is a big plus. Keep it up please.

 

Twat...

But yeah... I figured I would, so this is prolly the last smut scene for some time... the rest shall be plot coming out.

 

lol. You're welcome. I'm glad you thanked me for leaving a review, I was afraid you wouldn't

 

Niiiice

Had quite a few mistakes (thought nothing big) but it was still very good.

Also I think the Hero worship is starting to ware off....

 

Great Chapter!
I should also point out that although I love the smut, it's the presence of a plot that has me hooked.
Too many stories become the typical porn and I hate that.

I really enjoy your writing because you develope the characters, and have added depth to Harry.

The smut present is part of the whole instead of compensating.
I like to see deep stories that use human weaknesses as an aid to the dark path.

Too many stories put in smut to blind you from seeing the crappy plot, yours is the exception.

I look forward to reading more because I want to see where you take Harry. I'm sure whatever method you use will be just as well thought out, and I'm happy to see Herman will get whats coming.

All hail the great one!

Litha

P.s thanks for the rep

 

*worship*

*cough*

I mean...The Emperor Sheep bows to no one.

Nice Chapter.

 

Another great chapter. If there were any mistakes I just skipped over them. Looking forward to more.

 

Great chapter. A combination of plot and smut is really good. It's sad that there aren't many authors who write as good as you.

 

Warning! reading this story may turn you into a serial rapist. Warnings aside you made me get off my ass and log in to say this was a good story and i hope you continue it, the plot is one of the best things about it.

I havent posted in over 4 months. you have awoken this troll.

 

Just Great!

(MOVED: For future reference, don't post feedback comments in the Work by Author forum when there's a topic for the story elsewhere) - Sera

 

a piece of art.........nothing less can be expected 4m vash