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Dead Link Breathing Through by quizzical - M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Skeletaure, Dec 27, 2007.

2.125/5, 8 votes
  1. Skeletaure

    Skeletaure Magical Core Enthusiast ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Dec 27, 2007 #1
    Title: Breathing Through
    Author: quizzical
    Rating: M
    Status: Complete one-shot
    Genre: It's meant to be Romance I guess, but I'd say Humour/Parody/Restricted Section
    Pairing: Harry/Hermione/Ron
    Summary: Ron held them both, as best he could around her expanded frame, pulling Harry close to Hermione's body. Ron whispered words of support onto her neck, placing kisses behind her earlobe. She arched her head back, letting herself drown in their touch.
    Link: http://www.triofic.com/viewstory.php?sid=265

    Basically, it's a trio!fic, the twist being that Hermione is actually giving birth as everything's going on. Utterly hilarious. Selected quotes:

    Saruman especially liked it. Also, the whole site that it's hosted on is good for a laugh.
     
  2. Dark Minion

    Dark Minion Bright Henchman DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Dec 27, 2007 #2
    It's great. It's one of the best trio!fics out there.

    The story describes the mechanics of postwar trio!life and family better than anything I've read so far.

    Just give it a try.

    5/5

    ps: And in there you'll learn how to deal with your girlfriend after you were too drunk to remember how to use a condom.
     
  3. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Yoda Admin

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    Dec 27, 2007 #3
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    /New Hotness
     
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  4. darklordmike

    darklordmike Headmaster

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    Aug 19, 2009 #4
    Er, I second Xiph0's response to this fic. Consider me squicked.

    EDIT:
    Because no day is complete without some Harry/Ron slash. Yummy! :awesome
     
    Last edited: Aug 19, 2009
  5. Scrittore

    Scrittore Groundskeeper

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    Aug 20, 2009 #5
    O.O

    O.O..O.O..O.O

    No, just no. I read through mostly the rest of this before stopping before the end. I guess the humor was lost for me. 1/5.

    Edit: Also, despite what Taure says, I'm judging this as it was written, a romance fic.
     
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  6. Amerision

    Amerision Galactic Sheep Emperor DLP Supporter

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    Aug 20, 2009 #6
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  7. Nukular Winter

    Nukular Winter The Chosen One DLP Supporter

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    Aug 20, 2009 #7
    @Amer: LAWL
     
  8. Memory King

    Memory King Order Member DLP Supporter

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    Jul 5, 2010 #8
    The writing is alright I suppose, but the story didn't entertain me in the slightest, and the sequence of events felt unbelievable. The romance was weak, and I had trouble connecting those people with the canon characters.

    2/5, at least it wasn't Harry/Draco/Hermione.