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Burning Day by EsperJones - T

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by Heleor, May 17, 2006.

2.3333332538605/5, 3 votes
  1. Heleor

    Heleor EsperJones DLP Supporter

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    May 17, 2006 #1
    Took this from a challenge by Amerision.

    Title: Burning Day
    Author: EsperJones
    Rating: T
    Pairings: One line mention of H/OC.
    Status: One-shot complete. Might continue as a separate story.
    Summary:After Dumbledore's death, the latent energy of death is greater than usual. Can his Phoenix figure out the effect, or has he already failed?
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2943656/1/
     
    Last edited: May 17, 2006
  2. Patrik f

    Patrik f Guest

    May 17, 2006 #2
    This has to be among the strangest stories I have ever read :) Other that that do I acually like it. But there are a few things that does not make sense.

    If Dumbledore was Harry then how was he killed by Snape when only Voldemort could kill him and why is the timeloop happening, is it something voldemort has done to get around the prophecy as without harry so is there no one that can kill him...
     
  3. Amerision

    Amerision Galactic Sheep Emperor DLP Supporter

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    May 17, 2006 #3
    Wait...then who kills Voldemort?

    Harry has to leave the world after killing Voldemort.
     
  4. Heleor

    Heleor EsperJones DLP Supporter

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    May 17, 2006 #4
    That is the biggest plot hole I have ever written. Honestly.

    Snape is Voldemort's right hand, so in the metaphorical sense, when he killed Dumbledore, the prophecy was fulfilled.
     
  5. Amerision

    Amerision Galactic Sheep Emperor DLP Supporter

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    May 17, 2006 #5
    Your're condeming the world to Voldemort?

    I knew you were sadistic, but...
     
  6. Heleor

    Heleor EsperJones DLP Supporter

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    May 18, 2006 #6
    Condemning the world to a background character who doesnt even get one line mention in the story. Now that's sadistic.
     
  7. Amerision

    Amerision Galactic Sheep Emperor DLP Supporter

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    Aug 3, 2009 #7
    On one hand, I'm sort of partial to this story because I issued the challenge.

    ...On the other, it's not very well written. So I'll bump this and let DLP decide. Personally, I say boot.

    lolwut?

    2/5
     
  8. Scrittore

    Scrittore Groundskeeper

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    Aug 3, 2009 #8
    Amer, you once said this should be booted.

    I agree. :lol:

    Bumped up for review.
     
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