I'm actually surprised that it took this long for this story to appear here.

Brilliant writing, brilliant plot but updates are a bit slow for my taste. And of course the character of Ilya makes a very fun read.

 

Awesome story one of the best story of the fandom. easily 5 star.

 

Great story so far.

Spoiler

And though neither of them knew it at the time, they had just ensured that the plans of basically every single person in the conflict to come were going to go completely wrong. Except Rin. Her plans went wrong just fine without any outside help.

I loved this part.

 

It's a good story, but there are a few things that bug me.

The author uses a lot of text at the very beginning that can be summed up with "this is an alternate universe". It was a difficult piece of text to struggle through for no real benefit.

The interactions between Shirou and Ilya seem a little forced, both in setup and execution.

 

At any rate, it has been updated.

 

I dunno, I actually like the parts between Shirou and Ilya the best of all the scenes.

 

Well, it updated. This chapter though, MAN IT IS SO MEAN!

Basically, everything sets up for the next chapter. Wooo.

 

It was a decent update, I especially liked Ilya's bit at the end.

But yeah, ore of a set up for the next chapter.

 

Yeah good chap. I was almost interested to see what a corrupted Archer would be like. =P

 

This was updated, and dang, it's pretty awesome! Berserker is pretty awesome, unlike in the VN where he just get owned every route . Archer/Rin interaction was also very amusing as always.

 

Update

A continuation of the two battles. The interaction between Saber and Ilya was interesting. Let's hope next one doesn't take as long.

 

I love this story and I read it the day I get an update, but these long breaks are maddening. I feel like I have to reread the at least the last 5 chapters to pick it up again.

Still, a good update. Illya's fun to read as usual and the thing with Zouken was well done, but the lack of Shirou was mildly upsetting.

 

This. I haven't read the last two chapters because I can't remember what the hell's going on. I'm considering giving up on it until it's complete.

 

That'd be so sad

This is really good heh.

 

Assuming that it gets completed.

The chapter moves the story a long a little; lack of protagonist makes it less interesting than it could be.

Its still my 3rd favorite Fate story though.

 

So, this has been updated quite a few times since the last post. I think it's been fun to read, but this last chapter felt like there were some Deus Ex Machina moments.

 

Man. This story is too fabulous for it's own good, the next chapter should be very interesting with Ilya/Shirou interaction and Saber/Shirou interaction abound. Can't wait, and I liked Beserkers final words to Saber.

 

This story is now complete.

It was a fun ride.

 

Epic, literally.