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Oneshot Collapse to your needs by Ulforce Diizoid (M) - Dresden

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by H_A_Greene, Jul 27, 2010.

  1. H_A_Greene

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    Title: Collapse to your needs
    Author: Ulforce Diizoid
    Rating: M
    Genre: Drama.
    Pairing: Harry/Lash.
    Status: Complete.
    Summary: Harry Dresden hasn't been with a woman in three years. Fallen Angel Lasciel offers herself to him, but Dresden is determined to resist. How far must she go to succeed?
    Link: http://www.ficwad.com/story/138250
    http://theninemuses.net/archive/viewstory.php?sid=295&ageconsent=ok&warning=5

    Couple of different links available.

    I'm still not sure if this is acceptable material for here, but I stumbled onto it a short time ago and it isn't half bad. For the most part it seemed to keep Harry in character and Lash seemed fitting enough considering the role she played out.

    My major complaint is when things finally get going it's over almost before it's begun. The lead up didn't really deliver at all.

    That said it's better than some of the stuff I've come across looking for something to pass the time in the Dresdenverse. 3/5 leaning toward 3.5.