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Abandoned Contemplating Clouds by Tehan - T

Discussion in 'Romance' started by Marie M, Nov 5, 2007.

  1. Memory King

    Memory King Order Member DLP Supporter

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    Agree with everyone else, this story is still going pretty strong.
     
  2. cold burn

    cold burn Third Year

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    Oh thank (insert deity here). I saw this at the top and i was totally expecting to see that someone had necroed this work of art but my fears where unfounded. Also, like everyone else said the update was short but a welcome sign since I think it been almost a year since the last update.
     
  3. Kthr

    Kthr Unspeakable DLP Supporter

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    The scene with the umbrella is simply awesome. It's refreshing to read a scene where we can see an example of exactly how magical the hp world can be, and how people are able to do something other than kill or prank someone (which usually drives me to give up the story if the author start focusing on it too much) using magic.

    The romance is well done, and I do not find it too fluffy. It's actually developing itself in a rather believable manner. 4/5
     
  4. Oneiros

    Oneiros Groundskeeper

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    I bet that is how Dumbledore keeps people out of his mind. Everyone always said he was a bit off even by wizarding standards which is saying something.

    Also, I'm going to go ahead and agree that for such a short chapter it really does brighten my day. It's pretty much the only Harry/Luna fic that seems to really keep Luna in character.
     
  5. Innomine

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    I'd been ignoring this thread, because I figured someone had just necroed it. Surprisingly, it isn't the case. I'm off to go read it now.