This newest chapter continues in the same vein, but something, not necessarily a problem, that's become more pronounced is Harry's internal monologue. He seems so passive in making these observations, kind of listless. I feel like I'm playing a JRPG of some sort with the character having thoughts in a thought bubble. Harry has these bursts of fire and passion that are great. Again, Bellatrix is unpredictable, Spoiler her killing her own unborn child is a pretty good example. The author's going in with all guns blazing and her dialogue is just so right. Clinginess, vulnerability, then the classic blood purist. The distinguishing feature of this Bellatrix is that she has real mental problems. I mean this beyond the obvious meaning. She is so off-kilter and so deranged she simply isn't functional, it's not just to make her fascinating or to please fanboys. I also like the fact that the author is trying to develop a theme, on dark wizards and control. This is a story that will most likely have a brain.