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WIP Convergence of Fates by Gladiusx - T

Discussion in 'Review Board' started by Crash, Jan 23, 2025 at 2:24 AM.

  1. Crash

    Crash Fifth Year

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    Title: Convergence of Fates
    Author: Gladiusx
    Genre: Adventure/Drama
    Rating: between T and M
    Status: In-Progress
    Library Category:
    Pairings: Harry Potter / fem OC
    Summary: A more determined Harry Potter faces the Dark Lord in the Forbidden Forest. Instead of succumbing to cursed flames, Harry finds himself thrust into a new timeline with an opportunity to rewrite his fate. Armed with knowledge of the future and a resolve to shape his destiny, Harry navigates a world filled with familiar faces and unexpected allies, all while preparing for the battles yet to come.
    Link: https://archiveofourown.org/works/42330366
    Chapters: 38 (author has 45 written total so far), 222.5k words

    Overall I'd say ~3/5 - 3.5/5. I'll keep reading it. Despite its flaws, I was interested enough to binge it in one sitting. I skimmed some of the early chapters - stuff on the train, some of the stuff with the Blacks, typical AO3 annoyances, etc.

    Pros:
    • Capable Harry, decent action scenes, more than a few clever original-ish twists and ideas that have kept me reading, both with characters and magic stuff
    • Already into third year
    • Decently well written - not the best but not bad
    • Steady update rate and already 220k words
    • Voldemort is apparently more formidable as a villain

    Cons:
    • Prose stretches long at points
    • I don't care for romance with these kinds of fics, though happily it's not very pronounced so far.
    • A bit of OP political pureblood families stuff gets annoying at times
    • Rough around the edges on quality of some character motivations, relationships and 3-dimensionality (ex. Juno). It can be hard to take seriously at points - think Black Luminary characterizations, at times - not as bad though.
    • It totally let the air out of tension around the Riddle diary but I didn't care for that storyline so I didn't mind.
      If the upcoming years and chapters retain tension and are done well, it could redeem itself to a clear 3.5 or better

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    Last edited: Jan 23, 2025 at 3:03 PM